Prosperous Snow celebrating's (nfdarbe) Reviews

, I am reviewing "Snow Day"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and happy emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it closes the poem with the emotion of contentment.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses emotion.

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#4727293

Review of Scrabble Magic

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

, I am reviewing "Scrabble Magic"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, speaker, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and joyful emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it hooked me and drew me into the poem.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem because of the subject.

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#4727156

Review of May we express gratitude

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, sindbad

, I am reviewing "May we express gratitude"

, because I discovered it when I searched the religious genre page for gratitude.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooks the reader with its advice. Each sentence and paragraph give the reader something to think about before they continue to the next.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite. I like this paragraph because of the advice it gave about prayer.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written item a 5.0, because of the thought-provoking advice it gave.

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#4727139

Review of LUCKY

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, EDWARD KENNETH

, I am reviewing "LUCKY"

, because I discovered it when I searched writing.com for generosity.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it suggests that generosity is a part of success.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the metaphors.

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#4726957

Review of Global Warming

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, humorous_sage

, I am reviewing "Global Warming"

, because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (January 17, 2024)"

.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, plot, theme, and speaker of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because of the subject.

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#4726954

Review of Cold, Eh?

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, SandraLynn Team Florent!

, I am reviewing "Cold, Eh?"

, because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (January 17, 2024)"

.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with winter words being a permanent part of the language in Canada. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace by describing how Canadians survive the winter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of this story is driving in Canada. I like this part because it reminded me of driving in Oklahoma in winter.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it made me smile.

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#4726818

Review of Ten Birds

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham

, I am reviewing "Ten Birds"

, because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the birds setting on the phone line. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful story because it was romantic.

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#4726816

Review of The Jewel Thief

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, Dave Ryan

, I am reviewing "The Jewel Thief"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and laughter forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxed the poem's plot and made me laugh.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it made me laugh.

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#4726782

Review of Beliefs...

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, 🌕 HuntersMoon

, I am reviewing "Beliefs..."

, because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the theme, mood, and plot of the poem. The the rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last line is my favorite. I like this line because it makes sense.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing poem because it made me smile.

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#4726692

Review of Flight 363

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

Hi, drainfall

, I am reviewing "Flight 363"

, because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (January 10, 2024)"

.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Artemis' statement. The conversation and interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The conversation between Artemis and Jordan sounded normal under the circumstances.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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#4726684

Review of Chicken Noodle Soup

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Kate Brandon

, I am reviewing "Chicken Noodle Soup"

, because I discovered it in "Noticing Newbies Newsletter (January 10, 2024)"

.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the speaker. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because the give the way a homeless person feels at a soup kitchen.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the way it showed the speaker's emotions.

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#4726529

Review of If I could go back in time

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, H❀pe of House Lannister

, I am reviewing "If I could go back in time "

, because I discovered it in "Short Stories Newsletter (January 10, 2024)"

.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Howard's statement. The conversation between Howard and Andy moved the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is when Howard said the woman was the daughter of the woman who was killed in the car crash 25 years ago. I like this because it foreshadowed the climax.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story of revenge.

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#4726328

Review of I Write - Decade Edition - Roaring 20's

for entry "Something Is Wrong Here"

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, 💙 Carly

, I am reviewing "I Write - Decade Edition - Roaring 20's"

"Something Is Wrong Here"

, because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024"

forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the lights not coming on. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice are good choices for this story because they reveal the speaker's emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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#4726321

Review of Rubber Ducky's Dream

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I am Prosperous Snow celebrating

, I am reviewing "Rubber Ducky's Dream"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the poem's mood, theme, plot, and location. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like the last stanza because it climaxed the poem plot and made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem because of the rubber duck.

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#4726159

Review of A Super Hero Reveals Some Secrets

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, THANKFUL SONALI 17 WDC YEARS!

, I am reviewing "A Super Hero Reveals Some Secrets"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The question in the first paragraph hooked me. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense and the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it taught a lesson.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny story because it made me laugh.

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#4726143

Review of Heroic Hiccups

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

, I am reviewing "Heroic Hiccups"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza introduces the main character and the plot. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm move the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxes the poems plot with laughter and a lesson.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny poem because of the lesson about not giving up no matter how many problems we encounter.

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#4726140

Review of Dawn After the Storm: Tale of Redemption

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

, I am reviewing "Dawn After the Storm: Tale of Redemption"

, because I discovered it on the Please Review page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Demus. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of this story. I like the climax because it reveals Demus' determination to change his life.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Demus.

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#4726043

Review of A Smartwatch in Trouble

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

, I am reviewing "A Smartwatch in Trouble"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the plot and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxed the poem's plot with hope.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiring poem.

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#4726038

Review of The Vacation.

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Leadwood

, I am reviewing "The Vacation."

, because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the house being smaller then the couple thought it would be.The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation between the couple builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because they revealed the main characters emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the smooth flow of the plot.

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#4725873

Review of Winter Vacation

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

, I am reviewing "Winter Vacation"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the emotions of happiness and love forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it contains the most emotion.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed the emotions of love and happiness.

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#4725865

Review of Lost Mitten

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham

, I am reviewing "Lost Mitten"

, because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the difficulty solving the mystery of the missing mitten. The conversation among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story is the climax. I like the climax because it made me both smile and laugh.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this funny story because of the characters.

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#4725720

Review of First Snow

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

, I am reviewing "First Snow"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it closes the poem with hope.

Final thoughts:d I enjoyed reading this description of the first snow.

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#4725718

Review of First Snow

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Celi444

, I am reviewing "First Snow"

, because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"

forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the fox seeing snow for the first time. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, bird saw here just a. I suggest changing here to her.

I like: My favorite part is the way the fox changed her opinion of the center of the clearing after experiencing the peacefulness of the first snow.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the fox.

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#4725560

Review of Nuclear Winter (part one)

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Sweet thistle

, I am reviewing "Nuclear Winter (part one)"

, because I discovered it on the action/adventure genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with all nuclear materials simultaneously exploding. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part was the conversation withing the conglomerate. I liked this conversation because it sounded normal.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the conglomerate.

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#4725551

Review of abandoned pasture

Review by Prosperous Snow...

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, JCosmos

, I am reviewing "abandoned pasture"

, because I discovered it on the scifi genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza hooked me with Sam being the leader of a herd of cow. The interaction among the cows moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in t his line, Who keeps up alive. I suggest changing up to us because us is better fit in the context of the sentence.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the poem. I like this part because it makes sense that the cows would be afraid without humans to protect them.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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