you capture the feeling so beautifully, i love the "breathing is a luxury you can't afford" line. i only wish it was longer. give me more details, more to see you through. what is this person and your bond to them like, what do you love about it, if there's anything to love. very bittersweet piece, although the bitter definitely dominates. you have a romantic way with words
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