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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
POTUS,
THIS WAS GREAT READING,WITH SURPRISE ENDING. AS I READ
I PONDERED THE CLIMB WE ALL HAVE TO MAKE IN OUR
JOURNEY THROUGH THE ETERNITIES. WILL WE LIE FROZEN
AND FORGOTTEN, OR WILL OUR CLIMB BECOME A GRAND FINALE
BACK TO THE SWEET HOME WE LEFT BEHIND SO LONG AGO?
REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS! GYPSYROSE
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Review of Droplets  
Rated: E | (5.0)
STARGAZER,
YOUR POEM IS LOVELY. DEWDROPS ARE PRESCIOUS AND
DO INSPIRE RAINBOWS PROMISES. SUCH A TINY DROPLET
TO ALLOW CREATIVE JUICES TO FLOW. DO YOU THINK THAT
IS ONE OF GOD'S MYSTERIES THAT HE ALLOWS ONE TO BE
SO INSPIRED "from deep within" JUST TO GAZE ON SUCH
A TINY DROP OF WATER? KEEP WRITING, I REALLY ENJOYED
YOUR WORK. GYPSYROSE
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
ARMADILLO,
THIS WAS A GREAT PIECE BECAUSE IT IS AN HONEST AND
SINCERE ARTICLE OF HOW AND WHY YOU BELIEVE OUR U.S. IS IN
THE MESS IT IS IN TODAY. I PARTICULARLY LIKED THE LINE,
"delusional Decider is still not looking for an
exit door" BECAUSE IF HE WAS NOT DELUSIONAL, PERHAPS
HE ALSO WOULD BE ABLE TO SEE THAT HE IS THE ONE THAT
HAS GOTTEN US INTO THIS MESS ALONG WITH HIS CRONIES.
THE ONLY THING I WOULD CHANGE IS LESS EMPHASIS ON YOUR
TYPING ,BOLD ETC..IT BECAME A LITTLE DISTRACTING TO
THE WHOLE ARTICLE, BUT THE WORDS ARE TRUE AND I WOULD NOT CHANGE A
ONE BECAUSE ALL ARE IMPORTANT TO THE READER AND TO
ANYONE WHO WANTS THE REPUBLIC RETURNED TO THE PUBLIC!
IT WAS GREAT READING YOUR COMMENTS ABUT THE NEWSMEDIA
AS WELL. THEY DO COLOR EVERYTHING PERFECT TO SUIT
THEIR OWN BELIEFS, DON'T THEY? ALL IN ALL THE CONTENT
IS A 5 star. GYPSYROSE
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Emmajane,

This was a lovely expression of remembrance.Jane
must have been a wonderful person to have lived a short life and touched others so deeply. As you
already have found, there is so much strength gained
by writing feelings from the heart as you have done.
Keep writing. I hope peace will follow sorrow, for
our journey through this life is just a flicker between the eternities. GYPSYROSE
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Review of Miracle  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Caitlin: Your essay was lovely and written with insight. I really liked the thought that you realize
that you are God's miracle and that He has a purpose
for you. Yes ,all we have to do is "step out and
search" for that purpose. There are a lot of people
thinking that Someone has to shout out where they are
going or what they should be doing, but you know you
are right when you realized it is our journey and we
alone are responsible to find our own path. Good
writing, I enjoyed reading it. GYPSYROSE
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Review of Life Eternal  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Huristic:

"Life Eternal" very dramatic and sincerely written.
Grannies pass us by all to quickly, but leaving the
youngest ones behind is difficult for both generations. We become the Grandmother's all to soon,
but it is the impressions we make on the youngsters
that is reall what is important, isn't it? It is the
space in the middle of the circle, that we must make
the most of, don't you agree? I liked this poem.....
Wouldn't change it at all. GYPSYROSE
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Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW, THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL OUTLOOK ON LIFE. YOU HAVE
CAPTURED SO MANY OF GOD'S BLESSINGS IN THIS ONE
ARTICLE,NO WONDER YOU HAVE FOUND HAPPINESS. THIS WAS
VERY WELL THOUGHTOUT AND PRESENTED. TO BE THIS HAPPY
YOU HAVE TO BE IN CONTROL. YES HARDSHIPS COME TO US
AT TIMES, BUT IT IS EASIER TO COPE WITH THEM, WHEN
YOU TRY AND HAVE SUCH A GOOD ATTITUDE. yOU ALSO HAVE
AN ATTITUDE OF GRATITUDE AND THAT ALSO IS IMPORTANT.
IT WAS VERY ENJOYABLE TO READ....THANK YOU FOR SHARING
YOUR THOUGHTS AND FEELINGS. GYPSYROSE
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Review of Failure  
Rated: E | (4.0)
JUST WANT TO COMMENT ON YOUR POEM ABOUT FAILURE. IT
WAS HONEST AND WRITTEN FROM YOUR HEART. IT MADE ME
SAD TO THINK THAT SOMEONE WAS INDEED SO SORROWFUL TO
WRITE THIS,YET IF I COULD HELP CHANGE ANYTHING, I WOULD JUST SAY THIS. ALL OF HUMANKIND FAILS EVERY
SINGLE DAY, WHY? BECAUSE NO ONE IS PERFECT. DO NOT
HATE YOURSELF. REMEMBER THIS...YOU ARE ROYALTY. BECAUSE YOU ARE A SON OF GOD WHO IS THE KING OF THE
UNIVERSE AND OF CREATION. GOD MADE YOU IN HIS OWN
IMAGE, HE LOVES YOU ENOUGH TO SEND HIS SON JESUS TO
DIE THAT WE MAY HAVE ETERNAL LIFE.JESUS LOVES YOU.
NO MATTER WHAT GOES WRONG IN YOUR LIFE, JESUS IS THERE
WAITING TO HELP. ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS ASK HIM. I
KNOW YOU ARE NOT A FAILURE, BECAUSE YOU WROTE THIS POEM SO WELL, THAT IT TOUCHED MY HEART. KEEP WRITING,
BECAUSE YOU ARE VERY GOOD AT IT AND SINCERE.GOD BLESS
YOU RILEY. I WILL PRAY FOR YOU. GYPSYROSE
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Review of The Door  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The door is open in your poem just as the hope you
still have although tossed to and fro. Your insight
into this shows that you have met life's challanges-
those"dreams soon gone" left me though, questioning
why the dreams have gone, when the writer then again
shows hope....I am left a bit confused until the last
phrase wherein hope again is real. This is still an
expression well versed and played out. I enjoyed it.
GYPSYROSE
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a great story about "Snowshoe Thompson". I
have given it a 5 star rating because you captured the
moment in the life of a stranger, that made me want to
read more about his adventures. The pioneers have
always fascinated me and your story elaborated on the
hardships they faced to make them stronger. If you ever write more on this subject, I would love to read it. I have only been a member of writing.com since
yesterday, and I love writing, but also love reading
articles such as this. Thanks....GypsyRose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your idea of happiness is so true. It was a great
article and I particularly liked the sensible way you
presented those who seek money to make them happy. You
also included facts of those who won the lottery and
in fact ended up miserable. This showed that you are
aware that you can write about your own opinions, but
have facts to back them up. Instead of "preaching" it
showed you are also a "reasonable" person. I hope you
keep up the good work- it makes reading enjoyable!
gypsyrose
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Review of Time  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I LOVED YOUR BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSIONS OF TIME,THE COMPARISON TO A SINGLE DROP IN THE RIVER OF TIME BEING
"SWEPT AWAY IN AN INSTANT", YET BEING THE "ENTIRETY" OF ALL LIFE. WE CANNOT STOP IT, BUT THIS GIFT IS OURS
TO USE HOPING THE MEMORIES ARE FILLED WITH ALL YOU
SPOKE OF....YOU HAVE A SPECIAL GIFT TO BE ABLE TO
TAKE SOMETHING SO PRESCIOUS AND REMIND US TO LIVE EACH
MOMENT IN OUR LIFE TO THE FULLEST, LETTING THE "SWEET,
SLOW CHOCOLATE MELT IN OUR MOUTHS. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR INSIGHT. GYPSYROSE
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Review of A Sonnet  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I WAS REALLY TOUCHED BY YOUR WORDS. IT WAS A REMINDER
OF JOY KNOWING SOMEONE SO FULL OF LIFE AND THEN HAVING
HER SLIP THROUGH YOUR FINGERS. ONLY THE MEMORY OF THOSE LAST MOMENTS TOGETHER ARE THOSE WE WILL CHERISH
FOREVER...THIS SHOULD BE A REMINDER TO ALL WHO READ IT
TO STAY HAPPY, STAY POSITIVE, AND SAY GOODBY ALWAYS IN
A SPIRIT OF LOVE. WE CANNOT CHANGE THE ENEVITABLE, WE
CAN ONLY BE THANKFUL FOR MOMENTS SPENT TOGETHER. KEEP
WRITING,THIS REALLY MOVED MY SOUL. GYPSYROSE
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