|This was an incredibly beautiful and moving poem, especially the last two stanzas. The raw, yet subtle emotion throughout this poem is what makes it so authorial. I really liked the 'wind chimes' metaphor. In that same line, however, I would change the semicolon to a colon since they're not two independent clauses. Besides that, I think you did the poetry genre justice by your use of imagery, subtle emotion, and abstract meaning.