Hello KMH ,
I am reviewing your piece:
My review is just that, a review.
Your opening paragraph states:
From what I understand, Christians live to die. The primary task is to do what religion (or society, depending on how you look at it) deems to be “good” during our time here on earth so that when we croak, we will go to Heaven and experience eternal joy. Or, if we veer from the path and do otherwise (certainly being a somewhat reluctant non-believer qualifies for this), we will go to Hell and suffer never-ending pain and torment.
When I read the first two sentences of your essay I was …searching for the most correct word here…. ASTONISHED! I started reading it, thinking I might understand my daughter a little better. She is an atheist but she refuses to talk about her position, except to say, “Mom, I just don’t believe that stuff, OK?” Being the good mom I am—or try to be anyway, I tell her sure, and then I just keep praying for her. Why do I pray for her? Because that’s what Christians do, as you probably know. We are a bunch of people who put our faith in an invisible god and believe that good really does triumph. Also, all the various forms of Christianity I have studied do not guarantee a ticket to heaven by being “good”. No one is that good, least of all people who go to church. I have seen some of the worst sinners you ever want to meet walk through the doors of a church. The difference between them and non-Christians is very simple. They recognize their sin and acknowledge it, and then they ask for forgiveness. However, then they go right back out and sin again. Because that’s just human nature. Hopefully they sin less, but they are never going to be exactly what you call SINLESS—but that’s OK. God doesn’t expect us to be perfect. That’s why he sent his Son. Only Christ was perfect, and for that he was killed, my friend. But that’s another story. Matthew 27:32-61
But because we have the ability to adapt (call it evolution if that floats your boat; go with the God thing if it doesn’t), there is no possibility that we will ever experience Heaven or Hell.
I waited for you to back this argument up! But it didn’t happen. Instead you started talking about adapting to hell, like it was an actual place! Christians know that hell is the absence of God, not a place like Dante imagined. Likewise, Heaven is not a place full of clouds with mansions and earthly possessions. There’s a reason you can’t take it with you. It’s because you can’t. The only thing a Christian leaves on earth is her body: ashes to ashes, dust to dust, etc. But the soul survives, and that’s the key. A soul in heaven is in harmony with other like souls; it is “home” if you will. A soul not in heaven is lost, not in a torturous landscape of fire and brimstone, just lost, alone, like a sheep without its flock.
Suffering is only suffering when we also have joy by which to compare it. Otherwise, how would we recognize it for what it is? A bit daft is the human race—we need a measuring stick by which we can compare things. Without a comparison, we cannot recognize a thing’s place on the grand scale of good versus bad, beautiful versus ugly, kind versus mean, torture verses miscommunication. We must have moments of joy so that we can recognize what is not joy.
Now this paragraph actually made sense to me! I am a logical person and I know that for every reaction there is an equal and opposition reaction. The universe expands, therefore it will eventually contract. God is the ultimate Good, therefore evil exists. I know from first hand experience that evil does thrive here on earth, and thanks to some in-depth Bible study, I know why.
That which once gave joy must at some point become redundant. Heaven dwellers need a bit of pain to recognize the good else joy would become quite a snooze-fest. There must be pain in Heaven, and there must be joy in Hell. So please tell me if you would, what’s the freaking diff?
This part was a bit confusing. How can Heaven be redundant if it is the perfect place? I have no idea what it’s really like, but I’m sure I won’t have a body and I’m sure I won’t feel pain. You have somehow arrived at the conclusion that Heaven is an actual earthly place and not a spiritual realm. Likewise, Hell, as defined by God, who created it so he should know, is not a place, but a state of consciousness the unsaved soul enters when the body dies.
For the record, I have to take issue with the first sentence in your essay too! “Christians live to die!” You tell us this is what you understand, and I scratch my head as I wonder where you came to that understanding. You don’t tell us and I think the essay would be better if you did back up some of your statements with references. I’ve never heard any Christians I know say this. I work in a church, so I know quite a few. If I were going to research something I would read the primary authority on that subject, which in this case would be the Bible. I’ve read the Bible, and I frequently go over the more important parts like the New Testament. I have never seen that statement anywhere. In fact, the main message I receive from the Bible is this: God loves you, so love God, and love others as God loves you. In this way you become more like God.
So living a good life is pretty meaningless if you’re focused on self. It’s always difficult to think of others if your main concern is for yourself. That’s the really challenging part about being a Christian: losing the focus on self. Christians don’t want to die—they want to offer the joy of eternal life to others through Jesus Christ. The gift is free, and just like American Express, it has its privileges. Sharing that knowledge is a requirement, actually the only real requirement, of being a true Christian. So I make that offer to you, now. If you accept the Son of God, Jesus Christ, into your heart and soul, you only need to tell God. He will do the rest. When the Holy Spirit lives within you the difference is a true game changer. It was for me. But that’s another story.
I wish I could believe the definition of eternal damnation and the other as explained by Jesus. I really, really do. But unfortunately, I remain a somewhat reluctant non-believer.
Your closing sentence tells me you have never read a word of the New Testament, of if you have, you didn’t read it in your native language. Jesus taught using parables that the people of his time could relate to. The fact that these parables still relate to our techie lives more than 2,000 years later is kind of miraculous. I shouldn’t be surprised but I always am, at how the Bible is a book about sinners who sin and what God did FOR them. Yet the wisdom it has within it is still relevant centuries later and I always find something new when I reread a chapter.
CONCLUSION:
I thought at first you were writing a serious essay about atheism and why you were a non-believer, but it didn't take long to realize this was more of an opinion piece.
Although it didn't help me understand my daughter and her beliefs better, it was still interesting to read a piece about religion by someone who hasn't really read the Bible. Believe it or not, you're not the only one out there who has some really strange ideas about Christianity. I've even seen a lot of them on TV, calling themselves televangelists, preaching to people on the other end that they had better send money or they won't get to heaven. Talk about some screwed up people! Yikes.
You write an essay that is an opinion piece. You could improve this piece by researching the authoritative book on the subject: the Bible. Or you could read some works by Richard Dawkins or Bill Maher, both of whom are atheists, and use their arguments to support your premise.
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