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Review of Lightning Calls  
Review by Eiji
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Loved this short story.

Your expertise in the use of your dialogues kept the scenes vivid and orderly in my mind and I love the ending didn't expect that .

It was kind of hilarious. Is it a true story?

I like that phrase "happier than a pig in slop".

You, coulda, maybe shoulda use some names, nah I got the picture!

Nice read. .. eiji...*Cool*...PS we have a hot Korean pickle cabbage dish we all love here in Hawaii called "Kim Chee". Heard of it? ** Image ID #1779702 Unavailable **

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Review by Eiji
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love your opening lines which gives the reader a sense of anticipation of one's contemplation of life's moments.

Your use of Nature's many faces to express your personal emotions is superb for one can sense the deep aches and the anticipation of respite a new season of life will bring.

My favorite lines "Lackluster skies sink deep into dark feathery pines".

Your works are always intriguing to read for I find many deep emotions hidden, sometimes I think even the writer deep in emotional expressions must step back and enjoy what we the readers see that you have penned.

I guess that's why you always encourage us all to rate and review .

Thank you for being patient and encouraging to me and also for the many 'upteen' others whose lives you have touched

...always...eiji...ps forgot how to attach rising stars sig. for credit for m2m reviews

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Review by Eiji
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful imagery of nature and man in a mediaeval's day setting, coming to the waters of life being refreshed and anew in spirit, especially man himself. Though all the stanzas are rich with imagery I love stanzas five to nine, depicting man hearkening to a higher calling, to be baptized into waters of eternal life, to be saved and be with Him for all eternity. As a Christian myself I can glean the spiritual meaning of this beautiful poem, because within me is His spirit that teaches me how to discern the spiritual things where as to the common man not born of the spirit and the washing of the word , would see the beauty and may not see the spiritual meaning. Your eight count timing and rhyming is on the money. Thank you for such a beautiful read...eiji... *Cool* ** Image ID #1718355 Unavailable **
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Review by Eiji
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting way to share the Gospel. Got me riveted in the opening scene, just like a western movie. The ending was somewhat of a surprise. Your descriptive words created a very good imagery in one's mind that kept you intrigued to what was next. Liked the title...thanks for sharing...eiji *Cool*
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Review by Eiji
Rated: E | (3.0)
really stimulates your mind,showing your caring love for the tree,either it provided you with income like a farm, or you find solace embracing it like a friend, who gave you a life long enjoyment of climbing fun and a haven to escape to contemplate life, with a added bonus of eating it's fruit of life. Either way, this writing reflects the very essence of your life.
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