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Review by nunldon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fantastic, fun, story; made me want to start cheering!
As an originator, I tried doing this but had absolutely no clue about what I was doing here.
I'll have to delete my attempt because I didn't put in any requests for the reader to fill; I just had words from the statement I attempted.
I get the idea now and I think your example is fantastic for making this work.
When I did it the first time, as a participant to your story, I didn't quite know what an adjective is; redundantly silly; I know. Still don't really, just a descriptive word relating to a thing that does something? I'm actually very embarrassed, not remembering what adverbs or adjectives are.
Nevertheless, it all goes into the fun, I suppose.
:D
Oh, I'll have money in a couple of weeks and the first thing I need is a dictionary.
I lost my last one when a friend, inadverdently, took my stuff.
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Review of Sinking Ship  
Review by nunldon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Pretty funny stuff here.
I'm new and mostly baffled at figuring out what's going on, most of the time, but I figure that I can make slow (extremely) slow progress, as I go along.
Quite the diversion, at any rate.
:D
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