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Review by Nwriter
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
It is a nice, sweet story.Only a little long.Yes, I could visualise it.
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Review of Schrodinger's Cat  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I think it was fun.You must have had a rollicking time thinking about this.I just wondered about this-what would Sheldon say?
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Review of Do you recall?  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (3.0)
Dear Lamalostboy,

I think option no. three is the best, because it saves a lot of energy and time.

Unfortunately, as far as life issues are concerned, I tend to ignore the elephant in the room. I guess, it sometimes is a safety mechanism. When a problem is too big to handle, too big to be swept under the carpet, it frightens me and I, or all of us tend not to look there.

Issues like this are better solved if one has a dialogue.

No one likes a mess.

Thank you for writing this in such a simple way.




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Review of Diet  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (4.5)
So true! Specially that bit about starting on a Monday!
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Review by Nwriter
Rated: E
That gave the message in a terrifically entertaining way, a really great voice!
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Review by Nwriter
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Jeff, I think your posts are uninhibited.I always hesitate writing about my personal likes and dislikes.I have just registered some stories on a screen writers' site.They are based on Jain fables.
Since you mentioned crossover genres, I could share the link if you are interested.


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Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (5.0)
Says so much with so little.Lovely profound message.Yes, it is the one closest to you who has the power to hurt you.


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Review of My True Soul  
for entry "Lobsters
Review by Nwriter
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think that the same feeling could come back when you have done studying.
No, really, you have captured the intensity of teenage romance well.
regards,
nwriter


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Review of A note to self:  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Lucy,
That was beautiful.I always respond to writing that is spontaneous and sincere.It is nice to know that a dreamer is not always spaced out but can relate to the world, specially on this site!
Regards,
nwriter.


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Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow!It seems quite good!I would not want to be the vampire!
Nwriter
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Review of The Hardest Poem  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Dear Rose,
I can almost feel the pain.I can imagine what you must have gone through.
As far as literary merit goes, the verses were totally inspired.
Yours Truly,
Nwriter


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Review by Nwriter
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Eduardo,
That was a good short story except for the end that,( I feel i.e.)ended with a whimper.What I liked about the story is the fact that it had a beginning, middle and an end. The characters too are well developed in spite of this being a short story.Maybe, the end brought out the fact that the father was a coward still.
regards,
Nwriter


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Review by Nwriter
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Escapism,
That was one of the most brilliant piece of work that I have ever read.I hope you don't mind the fact that I have shared it on twitter.
Regards,
Nwriter


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Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Lightspeed 555,
I thought your Downfall of Stars really well written. The last line was really the one with the twist. I particularly liked the way you explained the science so easily.
Yours Sincerely,
Nwriter


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Review by Nwriter
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Sethisawesome,
You have really said it.Your piece shows a reflective mind and you have correctly gauged a middleaged woman's feelings.
Of course, technically there is nothing wrong with this.
I have written a lot about brands, so am really impressed with your analysis.
Sincerely,
nwriter


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Review of Oh the Cost  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi,
It's quite heartrending.I have never been exposed to any kind of martial experience, so it particularly seems frightening to me.
Yours Sincerely,
Nwriter


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Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Megan,
That was very inspiring. We normally think think of our insecurities. This really gives hope.
Yours Sincerely,
Nwriter


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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "The Review Tool
Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,
Reviewing can be daunting sometimes, but it helps your perspective as a writer.
This item was really helpful to me.
Thank-you.
Yors Sincerely,
Nwriter
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Review of NIRIAN  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Takari,
That was really exciting-it did not lose its pace even once.At first I felt that it was a little too descriptive, but the action did not fall behind.

Very imaginative and I definitely want to read more.

I too have written a few chapters but did not get down to uploading them.

you are going to have a tough time keeping up with later chapters.All the best.Will keep reading.

Sincerely,
nwriter



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Review of The Loud Silence  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (4.0)
hi,
I am glad that you have got back to writing. you are passionate about something-Writing!
I too got back to writing after my children grew up and became independent.This was before the internet.Now suddenly writing is way more exciting!
I just attended a literary festival,and found so many of the writers talking about their family and it's influence on their writing.Just last night I saw The Descendents on TV and guess what? The whole script was based on family history! We take our family for granted but their behavior is always interesting to others.Think Gossip!
Sincerely,
Nwriter


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Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (4.0)
hi Fran,

I wrote a review before, but it went off somewhere in space.Anyway, I'd like to say that that was actually a very profound thought expressed in a poetic way.Makes you sit back and reflect on life, which shows that it is a good piece of work.

All that turning and bowing reminded of all the period romances that I have read. I have just finished reading Philipa Gregories' book about Mary Stuart.I know that you did not intend it, but it so summed up her life as written!

I think it was Oscar Wilde who said that youth is wasted on the young.

Keep composing.

Sincerely,
Nwriter


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Review of Speaking Out  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
hi Amalie,
This was a bit overwhelming for me, a very straight woman living with her two sons,daughter-in-law and two grand daughters together with my husband.A situation like this would be rare in my neighbourhood. At least in my 57 years, I have never encountered anything like that before!

I will try to be as objective as possible.

Now, as far as the prompt is concerned,it does fulfil the prompt.Only, I found it a bit contrived-the daughter being gay,the husband being a cop.

Then too, her love for the politician seemed to be her first love.The way she responded to her ex gay partner's announcement was strange, specially her insensitivity to her husband's feelings, and the way she let him know her past. She totally trampled on his feelings, so then all three hugging makes little sense.

Your language skills are spot on.I like your dialogues too.

Sincerely,
Nwriter

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Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (4.0)
hi,
Yes it can be heartbreaking for a woman when only judged by her looks.i guess by default most humans do that.

According to the karma theory,good looks are a result of a compassionate nature.Also it mostly denotes genes worth being passed on.Not much of a compensation for all the less than perfect lookers.

The whole plastic surgery ondustry thrives on this fact.

Sincerely,
Nwriter
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Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi,
You are so right.The writing is so clear on the wall, but still people don't see it.I mean why/He does not want-you are better off without him.

You know, for me as an Indian woman, this is not really an issue.generally indian men look for marriage.Even then, why should a successful woman want to validate her ecistence through a man?

A well written piece that is tightly focussed and makes the point well.

Sincerely,
Nwriter
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Review of Still Here  
Review by Nwriter
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Fyn,
I am reviewing after a long time. Did you experience this, or was it imagination?

Sometimes we don' t always realise our true treasures. It was a very sweet story. The pathos was palpable.

A lot of hope, courage and optimism.

Very positive. Glad I read it.

Sincerely
nwriter
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