By golly buddy, this is a tough question. I like it either way. The bittersweet ending of Forever and ever leaves it to one's personal feeling.
The owl flying away seems to put an ending to it, as in fini...
Either way, it's a winner.
I also have a question. I have a dozen folders listing different categories in y portfolio. I have noticed others who do not use folders at all. Without folders, everything is available for those readers who aren't aware of the folder system, with folders it's easier to manage.
What do you think, with or without folders?
Reads like a good start to a story Aurora. I would separate the paragraphs for easier reading. A few minor errors such as worker.she had Needs Capital) She
Very good introduction Katarina. Welcome to WDC. I've been here for 7 years and I think you will find many interesting stories and friends on this site. If you need anything, please let me know. I may not know the answer, but, I know quite a few people on site. I also recommend you read as much as possible, engage others, enter contests, and have a great time.
Well written Kitkat. Welcome to WDC. I've been here for 7 years and I think you will find many interesting stories and friends on this site. If you need anything, please let me know. I may not know the answer, but, I know quite a few people on site. I think you will find many great stories and items to read here. I recommend you read as much as you an, I get inspired by reading others and the contests on this site are not difficult at all.
Good Job Icebear. Welcome to WDC. I've been here for 7 years and I think you will find many interesting stories and friends on this site. If you need anything, please let me know. I may not know the answer, but, I know quite a few people on site.
Excellent! The writing and dialogue was smooth and flowed well. The story kept my interest all the way through and the ending was...fabulous. This deserves more than a 5 star rating.
Well done MM. Your writing style is smooth and flows like syrup. This was an interesting write, especially for me since I wrote my first piece of fantasy a few days ago. I find the genre interesting and have been perusing ports to find other fantasy writers to check out their style of writing.
This was interesting and informative. And cute!
Surprise! Surprise!
This was well done by-Jimminy! The story was cute, smooth, interesting, and had a good flow with realistic dialogue. The grammar, as far as I can tell, was spot on. I liked this story very much and would recommend it to all other writers on WDC.
Good Job!
Well done.
And, I am NOT inflating your score.
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