Very well written. I enjoy your writing style, reminds me a bit of Doyle or Cussler. It was very easy to read, and kept my interest throughout. One thing I did notice
to have made a mistake,( but it mine.) Why on earth was I booked on a steamship? And where was it going? Nothing big just a slip.
Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to the next chapter. And welcome to WDC. You'll find a lot of good people here and a few good writers also.
I have to admit this is a bit different from other things I have read. However, I like it and the insinuations therein. Thanks for sharing Geoff. p.s I was in Alaska with the 75th Rangers back in 71, almost moved there.
I thought this to be very speculative. I like SciFi and this seems like the beginning of a good movie.
Well written and the words flow very well.
I can tell you have a gift of writing and you are an excellent wordsmith.
This sounds like the beginning of an interesting novel.
The writing is smooth, transitions well done, and descriptions abundant.
The only recommendation I would make is to make shorter paragraphs for easier reading.
Well done Jimbo.
I had to read it because I just finished one titled RESURRECTION OF THE DEAD
and the title caught my eye.
Very good writing job for 300 words or less.
Keep up the good writing
Payback is a B..........!
I hope she never gets payback for what she did and learned something from her lesson.
Well done...again.
The writing and transitions are very smooth.
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