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Review of Thirty and Three  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am no poet and don't know a lot about free style, but this was enjoyable and I understood the connotations within as I read it. I cannot give a rating based on my expertise, only what I felt when I read it. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Dear God  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent. I also trust and believe strongly in the Lord Jesus. God be with you and heal your pain.
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Review of A Grieving Mother  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well done Olivia. There is both sadness and hope in this great piece of poetry. My sister in law lost her son two years ago and I felt her anguish. I wrote a poem for her titled MOMMY (in my port). She thanked me for it. Welcome to WDC. Today is my 7th anniversary on WDC. You will find that most of the writers here are friendly and helpful, but, there are a few fuddy duddys.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Another superbly well written chapter.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Excellent. Very well written... The story was smooth as cream and kept my interest throughout. You are a very good writer. I'm on to chapter 2.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done LaVonne. I do so love a feel good story. Well written too....
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Review of Alive In Death  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well done WhoMe. I enjoy reading rhyming poetry, probably because that is the only type I can write at this time. I do know good poetry when I read it, and this was very good. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent. I am no poet Tim but I know good poetry when I read it. This was very well done.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very good! Smooth writing and a good intro to a who-don-it. I know this is 'flash fiction' but you quickly identified the scene and put your characters into it in a well paced scenario.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well done Angela. This was very cute.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I haven't read any of the above - yet- I was curious to see if you plan on publishing a paperback or hardcopy of book one? If not, I will purchase the ebook. THEN I will look into book 2.
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Review of Pre-Severence  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very profound and well written piece of poetry.
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Review of Ordinary  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
A cute one Dani. Well written...
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well done Brittany. I enjoy your relaxed style. I am no poet but enjoy reading it.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well done Amyjo. I bet it is Uncle Owen! Naw. Smooth writing with good tansitions and an interesting "Little House on the Prairie: style.
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Review of Midnight Angel  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very different and well done Angus. Nightmare..... or otherworld.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good job on this one B-Squared. I am no poet but enjoy reading it. I also read your story "Ranger's Beginning." I think you have something there. Needs a little tweaking but a good read.
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Review of Haunted  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well done Kat. I enjoy poetry even when it is as sad as this bit.(Although I only dabble in poetry) I also enjoyed reading the first part of Resonant Darkness. I will be back to read more.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very enjoyable to read Mary Ann. I also liked you 'a night to remember' Thanks for sharing. I spent time in London a few years back, enjoyed it for the most part, hard to understand their English though. LOL
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very cute.. gotta read this one to my granddaughter.
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well done and well thought out. I enjoyed this learning adventure. I guess I am discriminatory. I have my favorite coffee cup, my favorite plate, my favorite spoon, my favorite hammer, saw, book, shovel, etc. etc. LOL
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Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
We all have a bit of cosmic beauty but it is hidden, for the most part, so we only see the outer beauty. Thanks
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Review of LIGHT AFTER DARK  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
A great piece of advice and writing.
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Review of The Dark Horse  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good piece of poetic fantasy. Enjoyed it.
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Review of WWI  
Review by Oldwarrior
Rated: E | (5.0)
Another well done piece. Thanks for sharing.
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