|I am reviewing for "I Write in 2020"
The layout came up a bit weird but that's probably a site problem. Oh, boy, do I know the feeling of poo squelching between my toes(first dog), ripped up furniture(tenth dog), chewed specs(fifteenth). I even lost my Christmas dinner to a pair of hounds.
Plot and Characterisation
This covers a long period of time for a short story, which means more tell than show. Harry's character is not very developed, but Muttly's definitely is.
Spelling and Grammar
I see no problems.
I take it there was a word limit. You could work on each section to build on this. More show, less tell. Overall, a story I can empathise.