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What I like: this is a well-written story that has a mix of drama, suspense, and horror. I appreciate that the horror part was not of a more graphic nature, leaving that to the imagination of the reader makes it good - in my opinion. The ending comes as a surprise - well done.
Opening: the first paragraph is very well done; it presents the situation in an interesting manner and the reader is hooked.
Style and Voice: easy reading style.
Scene/Setting: the descriptive writing brings the scenes to life.
Characters: the characters are interesting, and their interaction is well done.
Dialogue: good dialogue that advances the story.
Area(s) for improvement: I have some suggestions. notes ▼
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