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Review by Paul D
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What I like: I like the story idea, and it is well developed.

Opening: great opening paragraph with good descriptive writing that brings the reader into the story right away.

Plot: as the story unfolds, the reader is pulled along to the end. Great ending.

Style and Voice: easy reading style; good choice of first person pov.

Scene/Setting: this is one of the strengths of the story. The scifi part is very well done.

Characters: I enjoyed the characters and their interaction is good.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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What I like: it is an interesting idea that is presented briefly; some background details would enhance the story.

Opening: the conversation between the characters brings the reader into the story from beginning to end.

Plot: the idea of the story is slowly revealed; the ending is well done.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: the scenes could use more detail. The setting is clear.

Characters: the characters are interesting, and their interaction is the best part of the story.

Dialogue: effective use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review of The Fallen Angel  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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What I like: good drama and suspense, and the atmosphere is well done.

Opening: the main character and the situation capture the reader's attention from beginning to end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: the descriptive writing brings the characters and the scenes to life.

Characters: they are interesting and engaging; the character interaction is well done.

Dialogue: the dialogue advances the story.

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Review of The Train Home  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What I like: I like how the history was shown; the emotion comes through strong.

Opening: strong opening paragraphs with good description, and a first person pov, bring the reader into the story right away and keep them there to the end.


Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: the descriptive writing bring the characters and scenes to life; it is like stepping back into the past.

Characters: are interesting and engaging; their interaction is well done.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review of Crashed Witches  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What I like: I like the idea of the story, the moral it gives, and how it is developed.

Opening: the reader is hooked from beginning to end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style; the first person narration is well done in engaging the reader and making the story interesting.

Scene/Setting: good descriptions bring the character and the scenes to life.

Characters: this is well done, making both narrator and Eliza interesting.

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Review of Sugar  
Review by Paul D
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What I like: I enjoyed this story very much; it is a good commentary on what is seen everyday.

Opening: the character and the situation grab the reader's attention right away and keep it to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style. The first person pov is a good choice.

Scene/Setting: the details of the story bring it to life.

Characters: the character is interesting and engaging.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review of The Monkey Affair  
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What I like: a good horror story that is presented in an interesting manner. There is a good atmosphere of dread that permeates the story. I like the ending.

Opening: the main character pulls the reader into the story from beginning to end.

Plot: the idea of the story is slowly revealed. Well done.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: good descriptive writing brings this story to life.

Characters: the characters are interesting, and their interaction is well done.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What I like: a creative idea explored in a horrific way. This is well written with only a few corrections. I also like that the gory part was not too graphic.

Opening: I like how the idea of the story starts with a conversation; this pulls the reader into the story, and they are kept there to the end.

Plot: the plot is slowly revealed, and the ending is well done.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: good descriptive details bring the story to life.

Characters: the characters are interesting, and their interaction is well done.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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What I like: I like the idea of this story; adding even more about the ghost would be good.

Opening: the characters and the situation open the story, and the reader is engaged right away and kept there to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style; good choice of using first person pov.

Scene/Setting: the scenes are clear and used effectively.

Characters: I liked all the characters; their interaction is well done.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review of The Cleaner  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What I like: I like the idea and the way it is presented; this is a story that should be expanded.

Opening: the character and the situation pull the reader into the story and keep there to the end - which comes way to soon.

Style and Voice: easy reading style; the first person pov gives it a creepy edge.

Scene/Setting: this is one of the strengths of the story; the descriptive writing brings both character and scenes to life.

Characters: the main character is interesting and engaging.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review of Elijah  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What I like: a great idea developed in an interesting manner.

Opening: the main character and situation brings the reader into the story right away.

Plot: as this story unfolds and details are added, the reader is thoroughly engaged. Great ending.

Style and Voice: easy reading style; the first person pov is used effectively.

Scene/Setting: this is one of the strengths of the story; the descriptive writing brings the story to life.

Characters: I enjoyed the characters, and their interactions is well done.

Dialogue: good dialogue that advances the action.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What I like: this is an interesting idea that is developed well. Great ending.

Opening: the exchange between the two main characters brings the reader into the story and keeps them there to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading the style; the first person pov for the first part of the story works very well.

Scene/Setting: the descriptive writing brings the characters and scenes to life.

Characters: they are interesting and engaging; their interaction is well done.

Dialogue: good dialogue that advances the story.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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What I like: -I like the idea of the story and the suspense as to what is going on.

Opening: right away the situation and the main character bring the reader into the story.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: this is one of the strengths of the story. The descriptive writing brings the scenes to life.

Characters: there is a good interaction between the characters.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What I like: this story was not at all what I expected. The reveal at the end was very well done. Excellent work here.

Opening: the character and the situation draw the reader into the story from beginning to end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style

Scene/Setting: the descriptive writing brings out the strong emotion and brings the story to life.

Characters: excellent characterization, and the characters interaction is well done.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What I like: a sincere and emotional revelation of dealing with depression.

Opening: the first paragraph captures the reader's attention and hold it to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style; excellent use of the first person pov.

Scene/Setting: the examples given are down to earth and relatable, giving life to this account.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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What I like: this is a strong emotional piece that speaks clearly to the humanity within each of us.

Opening: the first paragraph set up the theme of the story, and the reader is drawn in and held there to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style; this switches between first and third person pov. The first person is used quite effectively.

Scene/Setting: good descriptive writing brings the characters and the scenes to life.

Characters: there are a variety of characters that are well portrayed and advance the story.

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Review of Destiny  
Review by Paul D
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What I like: The Twilight Zone is a favorite of mine, and this story is well done in that it captures that eerie atmosphere.

Opening: great first paragraph, which hooks the reader right away and keeps them engaged to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: good descriptive writing gives flesh to the character and the scenes.

Characters: good characterization.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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What I like: this is funny; it is also a good reminder to follow instructions as well as not to trust the traveling salesmen. This is a very well written story.

Opening: the main character catches the reader's interest right away and holds it to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: this is one of the strengths of the story. The descriptive writing brings the characters and the scenes to life.

Characters: I enjoyed the characters and their interaction was very well done.

Dialogue: naturally sounding dialogue that advances the story.

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Review by Paul D
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What I like: captures the atmosphere from a time long ago. Weaving history into the story makes it really good.

Opening: this starts off with good descriptive writing that brings the reader into the story where they are held to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: this is the strength of the story; there are many details that bring the past to life.

Characters: the characters are interesting.

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Review of Crossing Over  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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What I like: this is a well-written story that has a mix of drama, suspense, and horror. I appreciate that the horror part was not of a more graphic nature, leaving that to the imagination of the reader makes it good - in my opinion. The ending comes as a surprise - well done.

Opening: the first paragraph is very well done; it presents the situation in an interesting manner and the reader is hooked.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: the descriptive writing brings the scenes to life.

Characters: the characters are interesting, and their interaction is well done.

Dialogue: good dialogue that advances the story.

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Review of Gramma's Hands  
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What I like: I like this story a lot. It is delightful. I particularly like the message of this story. If brings back fond memories of my grandmother.

Opening: the story hooks the reader at the start and keeps their attention to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: the descriptive writing paints a picture for the reader - well done.

Characters: delightful and interesting; their interaction is very well done.

Dialogue: sounds natural and advances the story.

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Review by Paul D
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What I like: great action adventure with plenty of intrigue.

Opening: from the opening paragraph, the reader's interest is captured and held to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style

Scene/Setting: good descriptive writing brings the characters and scenes to life.

Characters: the characters are interesting, and their interaction is well done.

Dialogue: good use of dialogue to advance the story.

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Review by Paul D
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What I like: I like this one a lot. It is creative, fun and inventive. I am sure it is a story that children would enjoy.

Opening: the reader is hooked right away, and the scarecrow and the situation holds the reader's attention to the end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style.

Scene/Setting: the scenes are well written, giving the reader a good visual of the story.

Characters: the scarecrow is one of the strengths of the story. Well done.

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What I like: I like the idea of this story and how it is developed.

Opening: the character and situation pull the reader into the story from beginning to end.

Style and Voice: easy reading style; the first person pov is used effectively.

Scene/Setting: this is one of the strengths of the story. The descriptive writing bring the character and scenes to life.

Characters: I enjoyed the character and the conflicts faced.

Dialogue: good dialogue that advances the story.

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Review by Paul D
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What I like: I like this a lot; there is good drama and action, and the characters are interesting.

Opening: the characters and the situation hook the reader right away.
As the first chapter of a longer story, this is very good in that the reader is enticed to continue reading.

Style and Voice: easy reading style

Scene/Setting: this is one of the strengths of the story; the descriptions bring the scene to life.

Characters: I enjoyed the characters, and their interaction is well done.

Dialogue: natural sounding dialogue.

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