with 6 - with six – numbers less than ten, write them out.
feelings.” Fred - feelings,” Fred
Fred and - Fred, and
Dirk. ” agreed – Dirk,” agreed
day, and all night, long. - delete commas
crapped – is cramped the intended word?
space that they - space they
Zaz, Do - Zaz, do
time she - time, she
was placing – was, placing
afterall. - after all.
Besides there – Besides, there
get her writing - get Her writing
tell her all - tell Her all
with her on - with Her on
action.” added – action,” added
these, that – no comma
chair.” remarked - chair,” remarked
about.” answered – about,” answered
meant that one - meant one
ensure that their - ensure their
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messages, the – messages; the
so to were - so too were
great, that Her - great, Her
her the house! - her house!
meant that he - meant, he
like Liam, - like neither Liam,
chair isn’t – chair, isn’t
time don’t – time, don’t
nobody that - nobody who
know that all - know all
hurting, and not - hurting, not
something, she - something; she
love.” said – love,” said
Or, does – no comma
up.” said - up,” said
helpful.” rushed – helpful,” rushed
“Please let’s - “Please, let’s
Oh…what – Oh … what
song that she - song she
land that she - land she
continue.” said – continue,” said
message.” Patrick – message,” Patrick
time.” concluded - time,” concluded
think that she’ll - think she’ll
it.” Dirk - it,” Dirk
we?”, he - we?” he
hopes that someone - hopes someone
words that - words they
was it?! - was it? - double end punctuation is not necessary.
that what - that's what
are has individual - are individual
is; will – is: will
that?!”, cried - that?” cried
THAT?”, cried - THAT?” cried