|Please remember that the following comments and observations are only my opinions. Take what you can use, but never be shy about discarding what you cannot.
Overall impression: Very strong emotional impact.
Rhyme: abab – the rhyme is well done.
Rhythm: good flow to the poem.
Imagery: good word choices conveying an emotional impact.
He mastered, wrath, strike, I cried, storm, blows, twisted monster, threats.
Area(s) for improvement: notes ▼
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