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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this, it's brutally honest and true. America has a broken system in so much. One can only pray something doesn't break too bad before it can be fixed in any sort of way.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
took me longer than planned to get through this but wow, great story. You mentioned this was for a contest, you should have win hands down :) I seriously wish my stuff was this good. it feels like I am only starting to get my groove back a little. Though tonight I did try my hands on a contest entry for a story to. Was a horror slash comedy piece lol, check it out if you, as always your experience and knowledge are welcome.

 The Frog King  (13+)
Can a painting really control our dreams and affect RL. In some cases, let us hope so!
#2235960 by Doxx The Monkey God
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this poem, don't know how I missed it in your portfolio yet but now I know I got to read more of it. It's got a haunted tone that pulls the reader in with the imagery. I loved the last line, "Sir, thank you for the fairy tale." It was the perfect ending to it. It makes you look at all the women today working or forced into working in the sex trade. Very powerful piece!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nicely written like most of your political stuff. Keep up the great work!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great short poem. Your defiantly a better writer than me. Your words just give so much imagery, and your vocabulary is far greater than mine. I killed most mine off I think since my high school days lol. As always loved reading this as I do all your work. It's perfect! Great stuff. Keep on writing my friend :)
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I'm really glad you shared that in your review of my story yesterday. That was just, no words. I loved it. Mind blown. I enjoyed it greatly. You're a great writer and I will be checking out more of your stuff when I get time. Keep on writing!
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Review of "Rapture"  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, I like this a lot. It reminds me of something I used to write before the ton of the insanity that I am detecting in this poem became calmed in me. I love the hints of darkness mixed with the inner battle sensed between good and evil. The push and pull is angelic almost. Great piece. Amazing.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
First off let me say this a very well written piece. I liked the poem in general. It consisted of a really great and fascinating flow. There were some points that were interesting cause for thought in my eyes. Overall I greatly enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your work one day.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good poem. I like it. I have been trying to do a little of a story from the hospital so maybe expect something new soon. Well not new, I started it for a contest and I crashed my laptop without saving, got mad and never finished in time lol. Keep up the good work. I love reading your stuff.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem really speaks to me loud and clear. I used to go through of that hell nightly/daily. Night was always the worse thought. I can really feel the pain expressed in this poem and just reading it makes me feel the pain and struggle that was behind the words. I was lucky enough to get a pill regiment that helped me with those feeling, I'm sorry you are going through this and do truly hope you feel better
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Lol Great after reading that I want a lobster now, dipped in garlic butter and mmmm. Lol. I know that's no the point of the poem but man it's almost 3 and a guy getting hungry. In all seriousness it was well written. Comedy was the best genre to with, it fit it perfect, Saving the oceans work good an and a good theme also. We only have one earth, and we got to make sure it is kept in good safe shape :)
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Review of Miss Henrietta  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Wow it seems Miss Henrietta has a pretty wild side to her I read that right. Maybe it might before my last sleep but I'm having a hard time getting that last stanza,

While sitting at her dining table,
Staring with unseeing eyes,
A dry encrusted crimson band
Adorns his neck, there by her hand.

Did she kill him? That's what I am gather but don't want to assume. I really enjoyed it thought even with that part.
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Review of The Diagnosis  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Okay first great characters and I loved watching them evolve. The end really through me for a loop but it was a great way to go. Felt like a kind guy on death, sitting waiting to die and as the needles send those doses of the final drug are send into the body that little red phone in the walls, least in the movies. It rings with a stay of execution as the prisoner dies. That final phone call at the end of your story really reminded me of that but it was the imagary of your story kept right up to me till end. great story, keep writing :)
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Review of Exposure  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
To me the minute you mentioned the worlds clown it became a horror story instantly. In the previous years I've done a reasonable piece of evaluating, generally of short story assortments. It's something that I appreciate and I believe it's an extremely helpful control for any individual who composes short stories. Not least, since it befits short fiction scholars to peruse a lot of short stories. And keeping in mind that it's acceptable to peruse just for the delight of the movement it can likewise once in a while merit add to characters mid story, This is some obviously great work. Hopefully within the net couple days I'll get a chance to read more of your stuff

Doxx
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Review of One of These Days  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I had this originally fairly great review here, or, so I thought, but I Messed up had cleared it, restart from scratch. Your blog is amazing, really well written compared to mine 20ish year already we been around eh? I still remember when I met you. We have some days. Your blog speaks to me greatly. It's like I can catch up on your life and not feel like I'm intruding. Keep writing, you already been an amazing author
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Review of Miracle Empirical  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Always have been a fan of poetry, It's one of my favorite genres to write. The style has a great flow It is both very descriptive expressive and shows deep emotions.
it speaks very well to the reader and you are able to grasp more and more from each stanza. My favorite part being.
"A distant murmur in a fervor of a panicked sound
I froze upright at the sight of a tornado inbound
No words to say nor prayer to pray left inside of me
Still breath I awaiting death by wind-whipped debris"

I'm not a grammar by far but i did find some simple stuff that should be double checked, like example in o pray left inside of me, it works better with inside minus the of. Still breath I'm awaiting . just small things, good poem though

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