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Review by frostwolf
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like it. Its awesome! I love the little note at the end, and how you left the open choice. I wasn't really sure what kind of vore you used is,, but I like it. Maybe you should make a poll to choose the ending. If you do, please email me back and I will vote.
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Review by frostwolf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Im so sorry for you. Reading this poem I feel at ease. I have finally been able to let go that my grandfather passed. I thank you dearly. May your sister rest in peace. I love your poem, quite sad but true. I hope you can live on without her. I didn't see many errors either. Great piece, lots of effort.


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Review of Not a good day.  
Review by frostwolf
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love it! I like vore, and this get down to the gooey details! I like the title, very suiting for the story, and the length. This is a different piece from all other vore stories I have read because you knew your facts, you knew how you were going to say it, you knew what you were looking for. So I say, excellent job! (I did find a few mistakes.)
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Review by frostwolf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Shocker! I read part one, and fell in love with it. You have enriched his story by giving it complex details, making the reader watch the whole scene play out in their head. Not once did I see and mistake, and I expected not to. If you ever get the money, please turn your work into a book. The world would fall deeply in love with this, entangled in emotions. You are a favorite of mine since I have joined writing.com, and I am proud to say it.


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Review by frostwolf
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i want more!
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Review of A story of Mine  
Review by frostwolf
Rated: E | (5.0)
i read this and wanted to cry. is it true?
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Review by frostwolf
Rated: E | (4.0)
this poem is the first thing ive read on here and it is simply beautiful. the enchantment caught me in pulling me deeper into the love with a rope. i loved the way you put this on here. but what made you want to write this? what inspired the true you to put this master piece out there? i beleive this could make you become a new Shakespeare...
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