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Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (5.0)
I went through that! The dog died, then I got a wonderful husband. My husband asks if I am writing something everyday! He is so good to me! Wonderfully written!
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really feel bad that veterans don't get what they are promised. I am not a politician.
I felt really bad for Viet Nam vets and all the vets who have served and are now ignored.
This was well stated. All I know to do is to continue to thank you for your service and respect you as I always have.
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Review of Gone  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good!
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! That was powerful!!
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that later school times throw many schedules off. No one will let them show up for work later, regardless of the reason. The earlier school schedules also encourage habits that will serve them well when they are working adults.
Well Written. Precise evidence pro and con.
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Review of Leap of Faith  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.0)
Written well. "It is a leap of faith that she "needed" to take sounds better. Comma after wounds as it is a clause. She was taking that leap... shows action.

To actually feel that over time, becomes empowering. But you have to let go of the pains of the past in order to live and love in the present and future. You will get there!!
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Review of Heartbroken  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.0)
Been there. Well written. "Your" is misspelled. It is supposed to be "you're" in your summary line.
Keep writing!!!
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting read! It lacked detail in some areas. The basic ideas were there. Sometimes, there are no other choices in life. Keep working at it!
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Review of Time Two  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I think you are typing in so fast that at times you miss the space. There should be a space between the colon and the first word of the sentence. "" are to be used before the first word and after the last punctuation in dialog. Just trying to help. In #1, Phoenix has the o and e transposed. I know because I lived there for 10 years.
It is well written. It is intriguing! I love a good time-travel romance!
Keep on writing and watch those places where you need a space or different punctuation!! I want to read more!!
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Review of Time  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Interesting. I want to read the next installment.
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Review of The Dreamer  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have had 2 recurring nightmares, both still scare me to this day. I too, am screaming, but nothing comes out. Very real, vivid. Thank you.
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Review of Christmas Tape  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (5.0)
Understanding something plain truly does increase it's value. Well written.
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Review of Bottle  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (5.0)
I just came back from there. I refocused, with the help of some friends, on what used to matter to me. I found that in most cases the interest had been filed away, not dead. Hence my re-interest in writing and learning and creating.
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very positive and upbeat. I like your poem. Easy to follow. It's always good to thank a friend for wanting to be our friend. I could see nothing that needed to be fixed or changed.
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Review of Shifted  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this poem! Jesus is sacred to me as are my feelings for HIM. Thank you for writing.
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Review of Life changes  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very wonderfully written. The emotion was all there.
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.0)
Times were simpler then. I enjoyed your description!
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.5)
Masterfully created and executed!!
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Review of Unknown  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Interesting start to a story! I was pulled right in!
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Review of America  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.5)
I truly agree with your sentiment. I enjoyed the way you wrote your poem!
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Review of In the dark  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.5)
I understand some of the frustrations of the blind. This was written very well, very descriptive. Very well done!!
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Review of Pumpkin Eater  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.0)
Creatively done!! I like the way you incorporated several characters into the story.
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.5)
Powerful and vivid! It was easy to read and full of meaning. Thank for your story.
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Review of Yesterday  
Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very high tribute! Well written!
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Review by Peacerose
Rated: E | (4.5)
Vivid imagery! Very well written!
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