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Excellent essay!! You have hit the nail squarely on it's head!!! I totally agree with what you said. It was worded so that everyone could understand it without using unnecessary superfluous wording.
First of all, RedZone, your thoughts are powerful as I too have been there. I tend to take a deep breath and follow what I know to be right and true and leave the evil behind. Sometimes it is easier to think it than do it, but I know that to be true to myself, I need to do what is right with the right intent. I went through times of not having real love. But I learned that to love and follow Gods commandments, I find peace and comfort. That peace and comfort comes with my diligence to obedience. It just works for me. I find no fear when following this plan.
Secondly, I found no major problems with how you expressed yourself. Just keep working on your craft. Others may be more objective than me with this topic. Trust yourself, breathe and look up. God hasn't left you alone.
Uniquely written with clear concise descriptions. I could easily follow your thought processes during the experiment. Even with my brain being mush due to Hurricane Michael, your writing was great! Keep writing!
Very well written and the opinions were spot on! It's a shame that some are only out for what they can get.
Please continue to write. Blog or not, you have important things to say.
Thank you for the suggestions for reviewers. It helps me know what to say that will help the writers I read. There are some very talented writers on this website! Thank you for creating this for us.
Very powerful, Katie! I have felt the same way. The difference is that now there is someone who replenishes his bucket everyday to feed me. I have found that love that transcends the physical. Don't give up. You will have it one day. I promise. God will back me up.
As to your writing: it is moving and powerful. Just be yourself and keep on writing.
Once upon a time there was a woman who felt nothing. Everyday, when she was younger, she would cook, clean, and take care of five children and a blind husband. He was so negative and offered her no help or comfort. One day, he moved away with one of their children leaving her to raise the others. Because of that, the others were better able to deal with life than the one he took with him. Until finally, he died. The woman kept in touch with her children and they grew to love and respect her.
Emily,
I truly appreciate your comment about my writing. I've glanced at a few of your writings and feel myself drawn into your world. Thank you. Technically, I found nothing amiss in your structures or writing. That's good!! Please keep writing and please keep reading my work. I am grateful you are here. Sincerely, Linda
Very visual and emotional! This is very well written! Please keep writing!!!
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