A very fun quiz. It covers a lot of different aspects of Christmas making it a comprehensive quiz. The questions were challenging, but not so challenging as to be frustrating. I also liked how you would give the category of the question. I enjoyed taking this quiz.
An entertaining poem. The rhymes had a natural flow to them. The imagery shows a vivid picture of the joy and innocence of childhood. It engenders a feeling of nostalgia, with memories of the simplicity of youth. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
A profound, thought provoking poem. It teaches that money can buy objects, but not the substance that lies within the objects. It has a natural flow that is easy to follow along with. Repeating the phrases, "Money can buy...but not." gives it a rhythm that helps to drive the message home. I enjoyed reading this.
A profound story. The characters were compelling and believable. The dad is an idealized dad, saying and doing the perfect thing to help his baby girl feel better. I was unclear about only one thing, why she would not want her mom to see her cry. It clearly coneys the message that it is useless to regret the past or fear the future. I enjoyed reading this.
An interesting section of a chapter. It pulls the reader into the story,leaving them wanting to read on. The characters were engaging and believable. I was a tad confused at the last bit of dialogue. I was not sure if he was talking to himself, thinking or talking to someone with him? I would probably know that if I read the previous parts. I enjoyed reading it.
A dramatic short story that pulls the reader in. I feel that it would work well as a chapter. The characters are compelling and believable. Leaving the answer to the question of if he ever manages to get the loan sharks paid off unanswered, leaves the reader creating their own answers. I enjoyed reading this.
I can see why it was awarded first prize. It have a natural feeling narrative. The characters are compelling and believable. She very young and endearing. The reader wants Nico and her to get together. It was a fun story to read. I really enjoyed reading it.
A very romantic poem. The imagery shows your absolute love and devotion to her, even finding beauty in her aging. The flow easily picked me up and carried me along the entire poem. Your devotion is evident in every word. This is a great expression of a lifelong love. I enjoyed reading this.
A heart wrenching story.The characters were engaging and realistic. The reader found themselves emotionally invested in the fate of poor Mandy. The father is a sympathetic character too, burying his wife and giving up his baby girl. I enjoyed reading this, even though it made me very sad.
An intriguing poem. The imagery shows the parent's love for their daughter and their desire for her to thrive and be happy. It had a nice and natural flow, almost like a conversation. It makes an excellent point about flowers and weeds. I enjoyed reading this.
An entertaining poem. In a mere 19 lines, you captured the sexuality and intensity of the tango. The imagery created a full picture of the emotional intensity of the dance. The flow was like a tango in itself. I particularly liked the line, "the heat of our eyes," it sums up the entire experience. I really enjoyed reading this.
A very engaging short story. My favorite line of dialogue had to be, “Lions of Persepolis throw your stones upon the scorpions who defy our land!” it creates such a feeling of confidence. I liked how you ended it in modern times without ending the battle. I enjoyed reading this.
A very dramatic poem about the hardship of making difficult decisions. The imagery paints a rich picture of the stress and uncertainty in making the right decision. It had a nice flow that was easy to follow along with. This poem can help others realize that they are not alone in feeling the self doubt in the rightness of a decision. I enjoyed reading this.
A wonderful description of a summer staycation. The imagery invokes the feelings of summer vacation as a teenager. It had a really good flow, that carried you along the summer breeze. It shows the fun and spending time with friends and family. I enjoyed reading this.
I can see why it was awarded first place. It is a very touching tribute to a mother's love from the "child'S" perspective. Your love for your mom is clear in every word. The flow was easy to follow along with. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing it.
A creative and fun poem. It tackles the common problem of writer's block. In just a few lines, you managed to thoroughly give some good advice on how to overcome it. The flow was quick, but easy to follow along with. It could prove very helpful to not "look". I enjoyed reading this.
A very passionate poem. The message of the horrors of war is conveyed clearly in this poem. Coming from three perspectives drives the point home in a creative way. The imagery created the picture of how war effects three different groups very well. I enjoyed reading this.
A very intense and dramatic poem. I am not familiar with the source story that inspired it, so cannot draw a comparison or any connection, but it was a very moving poem on its own. The imagery paints a vivid picture of the pain and permanent damage abuse causes. Thank you for sharing.
A very effective example of the brevee style poem. The explanation of what it is was very helpful along with the breakdown after. You managed to put a lot of imagery in a mere six lines. The rhymes where easy and had a natural flow. I enjoyed reading this.
Challenge successfully met. It checked all of the boxes and created a dramatic poem. You can nearly feel the fear that she felt. You changes from masculine form to feminine form seamlessly. The dark images drives the threat of danger home. I enjoyed reading this. There are no stars to rate, but I give it a 5 star.
Quite the comprehensive quiz. This is a thorough review for any Harry Potter test and would make a perfect cheat sheet. I like how you organized it into sections for types of questions, such as "Professor Snape." You even cite your answers with book and page number. I liked this post.
A very passionate poem. The imagery creates a vivid picture of a woman's love awakening for another chance. The flow was easy to follow along with. The message that it is never too late and there will always be a chance to find love is an important one. I enjoyed reading this.
I am not familiar with the source story, so I cannot make that comparison. This was an interesting chapter. A lot of dialogue, but it moved the story instead of having descriptions tell the story. The characters were engaging and likable. I enjoyed reading this.
A very informative article. It talks about a culture of sleep deprivation and the consequences. I like how you give an example in the form of a scenario, making it more relatable. The sleep deprivation and caffeine culture does not end after college, we are expected to be doing something all of the time. It was enlightening to read.
A perfect example of an acrostic poem. I liked how you defined it to help readers that might not know what an acrostic poem is. The imagery perfectly captures the Christmas spirit. The flow was fun and cheerful as Christmas is. I enjoyed reading this.
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