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Review by sadorose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
An intriguing chapter. The story is compelling, pulling me through the entire chapter. This chapter leaves the reader wanting to keep reading. The characters were engaging and believable. the story pulls the reader into her life. The dialogue had a natural flow. I enjoyed reading it.

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Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very powerful, emotional and poignant poem. The imagery paints a very rich picture of depression and the grip it holds its victims in. I am sorry that you are going through this. Many suffers of depression find their voice muted, and you have given voice to their struggle. I hope you are in a better place now. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of The Yeller Beast  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very entertaining and amusing essay. The "story" was compelling and pulled me through to the end. I wanted to find out what the "yeller critter" was, only to have it be a figment of your "unimagination." I appreciated the humorous ending. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Review of Bossu Enflammé  
Review by sadorose
Rated: E | (5.0)
A powerful and poignant poem about the burning of the Notre Dame cathedral. The imagery illustrates both the anguish and hope that came from that tragedy. It also shows that tragedy can bring people together, regardless of their differences. A touching tribute.

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Review of Nervous Wreck  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A light, but poignant poem. The imagery paints a rich picture of a teen-ager's attachment to their phones. It also shows that it is more than a phone and "toy" but a new way of connecting and communicating with their world. The flow was brisk, mirroring the anxiety. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An emotional poem that shows that there are many types of love. The imagery illustrates the purity, variety and importance of love. The flow was an easy stroll along the park path. It engendered feelings of happiness and warmth. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Review of The Look  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see why this poem won an award, it successfully met the challenge. The imagery captures the "look of love" and the fear that prevents one acting on it. The flow carried me easily through the entire poem. It was emotional and dramatic. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Review of Looner  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
An intriguing story. The characters were engaging and believable. An interesting take on a strange fetish. Having him inflated and "popped" like one of his balloons was unexpected. The story was compelling and pulled me through the entire story. I enjoyed reading this.

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Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An interesting poem. The imagery clearly illustrates the chaotic strike of creativity. I liked the bit about the "Inspiration Gnome", it was quite amusing. This poem shows how important humor is to dealing with the chaos and frustration of the creative process. I enjoyed reading this poem.

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Review of Digital Me  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A very entertaining poem. The imagery paints a vivid picture of a person feeling depersonalized in the computer age. The flow picks me up and carries me easily through the entire poem. You effectively incorporated the required words. I enjoyed reading this.

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Review by sadorose
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting story.The characters were engaging and believable. I liked how you gave it a romantic twist in the end. The story was compelling and held my interest for the entirety of the story. I really enjoyed reading this story, good job. Thank you for the story.

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Review of The Closet  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very intriguing story. The character was engaging and believable. The story was compelling and held the reader's interest throughout the entire story. Leaving the question about whether or not there was a monster in the closet, and if there was, what kind unanswered leaves the reader wanting more and to answer the questions themselves. I really enjoyed reading this story.

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Review of On Being Yellow  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
An intriguing poem. The imagery illustrates the feeling engendered by the color yellow. The simple beauty and joy from a simple color. The flow was like an easy stroll through the park. I nice psychological image of the impact of colors. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Review by sadorose
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An interesting short story. The characters were engaging and believable. The story was short, but compelling, keeping the reader's interest throughout. The sad ending gave the entire story a realistic feeling. It also had an autobiographical feel, well done.

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Review by sadorose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
An intriguing story. In the opening, you may want to capitalize Goeble. The character was engaging and realistic. I am unclear if she was late for her appointment, or if this is taking place afterwards? This story handles mental illness in a gentle and caring fashion. In the second line, you may want to capitalize Stay Puff Marshmallow Man, since it is a proper noun and change the e in marshmallow into an a.You managed to pack a lot of story into a very brief story. In the part where she is at the dining room table, the word "the" was left out of "sitting at dining...." The end was unexpected and leaving the ending open, allows the reader to answer the question about what actually is happening to her themselves. I enjoyed reading this.

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Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very adorable story. The characters are flawed, but likeable. The story effectively teaches about accepting and bullying. The wrens are relatable to children. It handles the sensitive topic of race in a gentle manner that children can access. I enjoyed reading this.

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Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An entertaining poem about the risks of gambling.The imagery paints a rich picture of the compulsion and regret when in the throes of gambling. It shows the struggle in a moving way. The flow was easy to follow along with. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

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Review of The Missing Years  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A very interesting poem. The autobiographical feel to it helps the reader to go into the poem. The imagery illustrates the pain and confusion of not knowing yourself. I hope you found your answers and happiness. The flow picked me up and easily carried me through the entire poem. I enjoyed reading this.

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Review by sadorose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A brief, entertaining story. The character was engaging and believable. The story read like an autobiography. Leaving the story unresolved encourages the reader to resolve it in their own way. I liked the levity between the friends. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Review of The Three Strings  
Review by sadorose
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
An entertaining poem. The imagery is playful and enjoyable. The flow picked me up and carried me easily through the entire poem. The fact that the strings each fail in turn is entertaining. I really liked how it was all a build-up to a pun. This poem was very humorous.

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Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very dramatic poem.I am sorry that you have had such a hurtful experience. I hope you have found the support and help with your writing that you are looking for. The imagery paints a vivid picture of a struggling writer that keeps running into walls. The flow pulls the reader along the entire poem. Thank you for sharing this poem.

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Review of Hold on Tight!  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
An entertaining story. The personification of the chairs was believable. The main doll chair was so adorable, the reader can almost see him as little boy and a very cute chair. Bringing the doll in at the end to give it a happy ending was a pleasant surprise. I enjoyed reading this.

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Review of Restoration  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very sweet, touching story. Having the parent making a mistake and admitting it shows that even parents are human and therefore fallible. The characters were believable and likeable. The story was compelling, holding me for the entire story. I enjoyed reading it.

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Review of Failing Love  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A powerful poem. The imagery creates a rich picture of the dangers of silence in the face of hate as well as unexpressed love. The flow pulled me along the entire poem. The message is important and effectively expressed. You successfully rose to and met the challenge. I enjoyed reading this.

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Review of Stanley Dooper  
Review by sadorose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A touching,lighthearted poem about career and family, how they are entwined. The imagery paints a rich picture of a man that loves his wife,children and his career. I like that it shows a happier picture of an insurance salesman, breaking the stereotypical depressed, and boring salesman. I enjoyed reading this.

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