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Review by jeff
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
you absolutely roll.

exsanguinating...what the hell?

I get the impression you know a little about of what the songs of Steely Dan sing...
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Review by jeff
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I am not a mystery reader, but I found myself instantly involved with Cassie's ordeal.
It is very clear and well written, with no problems that I could find.
I hope to read the rest when you finish.
Thanks,
Jeff
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Review by jeff
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sometime's just for fun, huh!
I liked it very much.
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Review of Game On!  
Review by jeff
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Had me going for a second there. Nicely done, and absolutely not what I expected.
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Review of My Friend  
Review by jeff
Rated: E | (3.5)
I have never really enjoyed writing or reading poetry, but have found what I've been reading on Writing.com refreshing and raw.

Your poem has an honesty that makes me want to read more.

You might try to include apostophes.
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