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Review of Stolen Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That's a very dark poem. Write more! This was very much Edgar-Allen-Poeish.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good look on the modern workaholic society, "smelling the roses" as I imagine, would be very hard.
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Review of Candy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem has a good rythmn. Just capitalize and puntuate the sentences. This really was good. The best thing while writing a poem is to read it out loud and hear how it sounds to you.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story was... great. You have talent, you really do. This was a good story. I'd like to see you write things in the horror genre more, because you seem really good at it. Anyway, this deserves a high rating. Again, you really have talent and I'd like to see you write more of the horror genre.
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