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Review of The Winds  
Review by LR Hudgins
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is absolutely delicious to read! Seldom does fiction appeal to the intellectual mind, but this little piece satisfies the need for both mental stimulation and light fiction.

The only comment I had is about the word "ennui" in para 2 of the second section. It is a great word, but perhaps a little bit fringe for even the educated reader. Is there another word with more mainstream use which could capture the same meaning? Just a thought..

Overall, I loved it - and hope you'll write more. If you want to look at other fiction writers who also use precise, decriptive language, look to Elizabeth Kostova and Diane Setterfield. I think you will be pleasantly surprised.
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Review of The Race of Life  
Review by LR Hudgins
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was great - I was immediately taken back to rowing contests in Mystic CT, on the Potomac, in Boston...so many places I have seen that determination- you captured it beautifully!

L.
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