I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.
What brought me here?
Anniversary reviews. Speaking of which, Happy WDC anniversary!
What kept me here?
I noticed this item hadn't been reviewed. I read it all the way through. This would be very helpful to someone who didn't know about the review template.
What I liked best:
I like the way it walked me through each step.
My favorite sentence was:
--Did their descriptions make you smile? Cry?
I don't know if I would tell someone it made me cry. Lol Well, maybe I would if it was a sad story.
What could be improved?
I use the Grammarly app., and it has a few suggestions for improvement. I will highlight the ones I feel are relevant in red for you.
1. of your screen;
and click on 'my account',
The suggestion here is to change the comma to a semicolon.
2. --Continue being honest, positive, encouraging,
The suggestion here is to add a comma after encouraging since this is three or more items grouped together.
3. It's always a great feeling to know that you are able to
really help a writer.
The suggestion is to change the wording from “are able to” to “can”.
I feel this is a very nice item aimed at helping others. Great job!