Your title "Keep America Beautiful
" really caught my attention.
Rhythm & Flow:
I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging.
Imagery & Emotions:
The image is not just of trash and liter scattered about. It is an image of the failing morality in America. It is saying keeping America beautiful isn't just about the way things look but also about the actions and hearts of the people in America too.
My favorite line is:
O, beautify thy heart from sin.
The Savior make thee clean,
that throughout Time in the days of men
blest beauty's always seen.
Here are my suggestions for any changes that you might need to do; I only put the corrected versions in red.
I found no errors, so I don't have any suggestions for improvement.
I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud, it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. I find this to be a great piece. Awesome job.
I want to thank you for sharing it with me and others here at WdC. It was an honor and pleasure to read it. See you around the halls of WdC.