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Review of Battles Within  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
   

Hello LegendaryMask❤️,

It is my pleasure to review your piece today "Battles Within " and to give you helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title " "Battles Within" " really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging.



Imagery & Emotions:


I love that this is talking about spiritual battle in prayer. I plan to link this item to my Bible study this next week as it is on spiritual battlefields and prayer is one of them.

Conclusion:


I love this poem. I am glad I stumbled across it. If dad was still alive, he would have loved it too I think. It may have even ended up in one of his sermons. 😊

My favorite line is:

I have never been alone
For you are always with me.



Here are my suggestions for any changes that you might need to do; I only put the corrected versions in red.

My mind and soul knows that you are beside me.
You left one for me to find. 😉 mind and soul is a plural subject, so the sentence needs a plural verb, “know” instead of “knows”.

I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud, it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. I find this to be a great piece. Awesome job.

Happy WDC Anniversary month!

I want to thank you for sharing it with me and others here at WdC. It was an honor and pleasure to read it. See you around the halls of WdC.


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Review of In The Heart  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello Sunny,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

Space Blog said I needed to read this to write in my blog today.

What kept me here?

This is a catchy poem. It is emotional and you can feel the emotional pull.

What I liked best:

This is a great perspective of what is in the heart.

My favorite sentence was:

For in the heart is where
treasures lie and secrets are kept.

What could be improved?

I found no errors. A little rhyme wouldn't hurt.

Summary:

Overall, this is a nice poem. It is honest.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
These are awesome! Keep adding to the collection. I collected some trinkets while I was at it. I see it is your WDC anniversary. Happy Anniversary! I hope you have many more to come. I look forward to reading even more of your writing. I enjoy seeing you around WDC.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (4.5)


Hello LegendaryMask❤️,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

Just me being nosy again and snooping in your port😊

What kept me here?

It was interesting because now I know I am not the only one that talks to myself like that. Lol

What I liked best:

You made yourself laugh in the end.

My favorite sentence was:

Breathe in God ...
Breathe out the Devil ...

What could be improved?

I found 1 error and all this time I thought you were perfect. 😉
I know you want to be apart of their family still.
Apart should be a part.

Summary:

These are great thoughts. I have been enjoying reading your writings and exploring your port.

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Review of Moon  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
   

Hello Schnujo is Late to Lannister,

It is my pleasure to review your piece today "Moon" and to give you helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title " "Moon" " really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging.



Imagery & Emotions:


Short, sweet, and to the point. I get the picture of the crescent moon glowing as night falls.

Conclusion:


This poem about the moon is very nicely written. Awesome job!

My favorite line is:

stealing light each passing night



Here are my suggestions for any changes that you might need to do; I only put the corrected versions in red.

I found no errors in this. I don't have any suggestions for improvement.

I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud, it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. I find this to be a great piece. Awesome job.



I want to thank you for sharing it with me and others here at WdC. It was an honor and pleasure to read it. See you around the halls of WdC.


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Review of Cards of Love  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (4.5)


Hello LegendaryMask❤️,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

I am having fun snooping in your port. 😉

What kept me here?

I thought this could use another review. It really is a great idea.

What I liked best:

I like the fact that it gives some love to others.

My favorite sentence was:

Please, join me in sending love to our brothers and sisters of this insanely writing community we all call home away from home.

What could be improved?

To cheer them up when they need it most, especially this past year.
Is this a complete sentence? Grammarly didn't catch this.
Grammarly says you make this look easy. 😊
I would suggest tacking it onto the sentence before it.

Summary:

I think this is an awesome project. I hope you find it successful.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (4.0)


Hello LegendaryMask❤️,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

It's still your anniversary month. Happy WDC anniversary month!

What kept me here?

I love your Fable stories. I want more! 😊

What I liked best:

Your neighbor thought you were telling her to go back in. Lol

My favorite sentence was:

My psycho fur daughter and her newfound friend (Grey cat). Sorry, no pictures of the hurricane "Fable" and the destruction left in its wake ..

What could be improved?

1.Fable sees Beau out of the corner of her eye.
If should be of.

2. While I'm busily shotting the pictures,
Instead of shotting pictures, I believe you mean shooting? I might suggest changing the word to taking pictures instead.

Summary:

This is a great story.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I realize these are pictures but these are important pictures. I want to honor them a little too so why not give them a rating and review. I absolutely love this. Where were you that fateful morning? I was just walking into work when the reports were showing up on the tv. I worked at Penn Square Mall at the time. I have never seen a Mall so empty. It was kind of spooky. Thankfully I didn't know anyone that was affected personally. I can only imagine how the New Yorkers felt especially having been in plc at the time of that bombing in 1995.

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Review of Honoring My Son  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I couldn't let this item continue to be unrated or reviewed. 20 years of service! Yay! You can tell him I said Thanks for his service. That is awesome. Love this tribute to him. You could frame that and send copy to family but maybe put a wallet size photo of him in his uniform in there some where. That is the only way I could think to make it better. I am glad I stumbled upon this.

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Review of Imponderables  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
   

Hello Zeke,

It is my pleasure to review your piece today " " and to give you helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title " " really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging.



Imagery & Emotions:


I get the image of a person walking for exercise in the mall pondering about the people they see as they are walking around the mall. The emotion is that of routine.

Conclusion:


Overall, I think it conveys the intended message.

My favorite line is:

Another day of imponderables
For the intrepid mall walker



Here are my suggestions for any changes that you might need to do; I only put the corrected versions in red.

I found no obvious errors. I don't have any suggestions for improvement. Great job.

I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud, it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. I find this to be a great piece. Awesome job.

Happy WDC anniversary!

I want to thank you for sharing it with me and others here at WdC. It was an honor and pleasure to read it. See you around the halls of WdC.


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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
   

Hello VictoriaMcCullough,

It is my pleasure to review your piece today " Salute to Bob Hope" and to give you helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title ""Salute To Bob Hope"  " really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging.



Imagery & Emotions:


I can picture from this Bob Hope putting on a performance while your dad was in the audience. Imagery is well done.

Conclusion:


I am sure your dad would be proud and Bob Hope would be grateful. This is a nice mention of both men.

My favorite line is:

The clairinet Dad
held in his hands
claims a shot in its
case from a grazed
bullet.



Here are my suggestions for any changes that you might need to do; I only put the corrected versions in red.

clairinet Is spelled clarinet.

I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud, it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. I find this to be a great piece. Awesome job.



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Review of Poet Tree  
Review by Marvelous Friend
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello fyn,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

Space Blog says I have to read this today. 😊

What kept me here?

I love poetry.

What I liked best:

I like the comfort expressed of having a special place to write.

My favorite sentence was:

I nestle between the gnarled knees
of this hundred-year oak
and listen to the lyrics of
Autumn's song.

What could be improved?

I found no errors, and so I have no suggestions for improvement.

Summary:

This poem is well-written. Great job!

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)


Hello ruwth,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?
To be honest, the offer of gift points.

What kept me here?

I am intrigued by the whole story, notes and all. Spanish is an interesting language I think.

What I liked best:

I can feel your excitement in your words.

My favorite sentence was:

This is the Bible I read. It is my favorite book.

What could be improved?

I found 2 things.
1. life changing
You may consider adding a hyphen.

2. He cleanses me from ALL unrighteous
I believe you mean unrighteousness here.

Summary:

Thanks for sharing this. I find this to be a lovely picture and I love that you included the back-story in your notes.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
   

Hello Beholden,

It is my pleasure to review your piece today "A Thanksgiving Remembered " and to give you helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title " "A Thanksgiving Remembered" " really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging.



Imagery & Emotions:


I get the emotion of feeling awkward in this. It is a feeling of being proud and thankful at the same time. It is feeling judged by others. There is a lot going on here. This is a great way to express how you feel. I think it is a great poem, but I think you can be proud and grateful at the same time.

Conclusion:


I say, why not be proud of what you are thankful for especially for the country in which you live?

My favorite line is:

I, being caught unprepared,
spoke of how grateful I was for America,
together with reasons why and
finishing with a flourish about freedom.

Here are my suggestions for any changes that you might need to do; I only put the corrected versions in red.

There were no errors found. I have no suggestions for improvement.

I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud, it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. I find this to be a great piece. Awesome job.



I want to thank you for sharing it with me and others here at WdC. It was an honor and pleasure to read it. See you around the halls of WdC.


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Review of Hello Momma,  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)


Hello LegendaryMask❤️,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

Happy WDC anniversary! I am having fun snooping around in your port.

What kept me here?

Curiosity

What I liked best:

You shared the story so it can help others.

My favorite sentence was:

I love and miss you, Momma

What could be improved?

No errors were found. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Summary:

I think this is a very sweet letter to your momma. She would be proud of you.
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Review of Quenched by Tears  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
   

Hello iluvhorses,

It is my pleasure to review your piece today "Quenched by Tears " and to give you helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title "
 Quenched by Tears  (E)
free verse poem
#2215057 by iluvhorses
" really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging.



Imagery & Emotions:


The emotion is one of sadness. Unfortunately, I don't believe even tears can quench the flames of Hell. Only God Himself can give you the measure of faith to quench the fires of Hell, and I believe he will if you ask for it.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

the just shall live by faith.



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I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud, it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. I find this to be a great piece. Awesome job.

No writing errors were found so I have no suggestions for improvement.

I want to thank you for sharing it with me and others here at WdC. It was an honor and pleasure to read it. See you around the halls of WdC.


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Review of Reflective Piece  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (4.0)


Hello Waters,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

I see it is your WDC anniversary today. Happy WDC anniversary! 🎉

What kept me here?

It looked like this item could use a good review, so here I am.

What I liked best:

This item has some good information in it.

My favorite sentence was:

After we’d return from extended trips, her “daughters,” as she referred to her plants, would arise from dormancy the instant she spoke to them; each one reaching out to her, swaying as she caressed them.

What could be improved?

1. such as birds, mammals, insects, vines and saplings that,
Another comma is needed after vines.

2. intellectual and spiritual health, was passed
The comma after health is not necessary.

Summary:

Overall this seems to be very well written. I only found the two errors.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (4.5)
   

Hello Aiden the fox,

It is my pleasure to review your piece today " For a poem contest" and to give you helpful information if needed.

Disclaimer:


I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Title:


Your title ""For a poem contest"  " really caught my attention.


Rhythm & Flow:


I found the rhythm and flow very easy to follow and engaging.



Imagery & Emotions:


The emotions are that of depression, hopelessness, and anger. It is a picture of someone feeling trapped by their circumstances. This is the imagery and feel I get from this.

Conclusion:


My favorite line is:

We all will die, so I wont lie.




Here are my suggestions for any changes that you might need to do; I only put the corrected versions in red.

We all will die, so I wont lie.
Wont needs an apostrophe (won't)

I'm not sure how you feel about the changes, but if you read it out loud, it seems to have a better flow. I hope this helps you. I find this to be a great piece. Awesome job.



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Review of Peaceful Handover  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (4.0)


Hello seektheshark,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

I received your request for a review.

What kept me here?

Curiosity as to how the story would end is what kept my interest.

What I liked best:

The story is bizarre but somewhat believable.

My favorite sentence was:

And it ended not with war or disaster, not with the environment failing or social collapse, but with the trains running on time.

What could be improved?

1.all signs point that is has somehow adapted
Is should be it.

2. in the end the system rolled
There needs to be a comma between these 2 words.


Summary:

This is a good story. I only found the 2 mistakes.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello Redtowrite,

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest, for I'm not an expert reviewer.

What brought me here?

Space blog had me read this yesterday for my blog.

What kept me here?

Everyone needs a little hope.

What I liked best:

Hmmm, I am not sure that we'll only end up as memories brings a whole lot of hope. Lol however, the point is well made.

My favorite sentence was:

Hope is always there to call upon.

What could be improved?

I found no errors that I could see. I have no suggestion for improvement.

Summary:

I like the fact that this poem is a little different. It is well written, and I hope to see more of your writing in the future.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cancer is difficult to deal with rather it is within yourself or a loved one.

These are just suggestions as I am not an expert, but I hope it helps.

My suggestions for improvement:
1. Mom's helplessness found outlet in doing.
I would suggest to add the word “an” in front of outlet.

2. the emotions which could overwhelm.
I would suggest adding the word “them” after overwhelm.

I like that everyone was able to find an outlet and purpose to pursue. It sounds like you were all able to make something positive out of a negative. Thanks for sharing your story.

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Review of Marvilla  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think it is appropriate that I rate and view this. Lol You are a good teacher. I am doing all sorts of things on this site now. I think you have taught me at least half of what I know. I am so glad we have been able to reconnect. I love you cousin. You are Awesome! Of course, I have no suggestions for improvement on this one because this is where you were training me. 😉

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Review of I miss you Momma  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can give you a unique review here as I knew your momma. I miss her too. I would have loved to ask her questions and gotten closer to her as I finished growing up. I think your momma would have loved this. Who knows, maybe she is smiling down at you from heaven right now. There were no errors in your text. I don't know that I would suggest improvements even if I had any. I think this is very sweet and well done. Love you cousin.

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Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You know I love this picture. Fable is so photogenic and adorable. She is such a pretty fur baby. I think you should make this picture an 8 by 10 and frame it and hang it on your wall. It looks professionally done in my personal opinion. This is a great picture and she looks like she is smiling. You have some awesome pictures.

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Review of Dinner with Fable  
Review by Marvelous Friend
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey, why now review a couple of photos. I don't usually do photos, but for you, why not? Happy WDC anniversary month. I hope you enjoy it. 😊🎉 This photo actually makes me hungry. It looks good. Are you sharing the recipe? I don't think that photo needs improvement. It says it all right there. Now I think I will go have lunch. 😉
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