Nicki Heart's (pixieandangel) Reviews

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#2090934

Review of The Pain of Love

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Aww....

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#2090931

Review of What is Plain Simplicity?

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Rated: E | (4.5)

Super good. Keep writing stuff like this.

"If practice makes perfect, and nobody's perfect, why practice? Becuase it makes like a lot harder for everyone else."

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#2090061

Review of Dreams

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Rated: E | (4.5)

I lost my father when I was quite young, and you got the emotions perfect. I would fix some of the grammar errors, and change some words, then it would earn you the 5.0 :)

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#2090059

Review of entrapment

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Rated: E | (2.5)

Add more. How does he/she (you didn't specify) get out? Caplitalize and use your puncuation, that will always get the extra bonus points you need. Have fun with it, though!

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#2090054

Review of The Prey/Hunter

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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)

I would give it a 4.0, but in the last line, you say the same thing two diffrent ways. It should be the the hunted becomes the hunter, and the killer becomes the killed.

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#2089119