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Review by PlannerDan
Rated: E | (4.5)
I feel a bit uneasy reviewing a letter. It is a personal offering and should somehow remain unchanged. However, since it is posted I will do so.

The sentiment and the emotion of your letter is priceless. The tension of your childhood is evident. It will be interesting to see how it surfaces as the years progress.

Two technical errors flawed my review, otherwise I would have given it a 5.

1. The verb tense in the second sentence should be "are" not "is"...There are so many things..".

2. Do not use the "#" sign. Like numbers, I prefer to write them out. six pounds-two ounces

Beautiful thoughts and very well written letter.

Dan
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Review of Matthew's Letters  
Review by PlannerDan
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have not read the letters yet. But I already know that I love this idea. I am an avid history buff. I believe every family should have a written history. I see no better vehicle than to chronicle a child's history with a personal letter on his birthday. Of course, there should be more. But this one act is priceless.

I will now wander through your letters.

Dan
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Review of Turkey Dinner  
Review by PlannerDan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Continuity was very good. One thought led to another in logical sequence. The Humor was familiar and well placed. Thank you for having a well told story for my first review. It made it easier.
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