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Review of Apocalypse  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Short and sweet. Felt genuine, true. Was bold, brazen, confident, engaging, vital.. I liked. 4.5
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Review of My Kitten Widget  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very good. 5
No bumps on the road, no cause to find fault. This really held my attention and that's important.. Reader did not stop reading or zone out. Touching, sad, worthwhile. Worth my time, thanks.
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Review of The Darkest Spot  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Deep. I liked the light bulb analogy. Communicates certain emotive states well, like lonliness and resentment.. However i cant say i fully understand The spirit behind this i did, all the same, enjoy reading. Liked it 4
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Review of Change of weather  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (4.0)
I could relate. Created an image of "tramping" in which the tired, and various, trampers retire to a hut in the forest sharing it with like-minded travellers. That's my reaction, re-read it, liked it 4
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Review of Wild Flowers  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (4.5)
"Entwine garlands of foxgloves in our hair,
Racing across the states we discover"
was nice. You communicate a certain serenity and freedom here, that is what is coming through the most for me. Uplifting, light filled, engenders positive and welcome feelings. Highly emotive, looking good. 4.5
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was, as im sure you know, quite cynical. I liked the line about the national debt lol. This got my attention and was not bad. 4
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Review of If Only  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was good. Im writing from this prompt at the moment. You do well. This was engaging and held my attention well.. I did not zone out but arrived at the end anticipating more. I liked this, worth the read 4.5
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Review of Inquisition  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You have created a disturbing image and your theme was clear. Good flow and meter, second verse picked up good and was a welcome change in pace. I thought this was well written, dark, sinister, brutal, revealing. It communicated something of the shame and criminality that went on. 4
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
lol. Um. Was good. Ill just assume, for my own fragile mind, that your just an avid pogo stick enthusiasist. Again nice polished result, good delivery - no bumps in the road. This was short and sweet, solid. And funny. 4.5
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Review of The Lord Calls  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent! And the line "all the love we give and receive strengthens us to believe" was a well chosen line. I found this to be genuine.. Truth. A certain wisdom comes through that reveals something of the writer's faith and devotion. Again a genuine effort and a welcomed, and, unique result. Thanks for this Mazzii 5
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Review of Our Bank Of Life  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good sealed delivery. Theme became more clear upon conclusion. Was engaging and held attention. Mature and serious. I liked this 4.5
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Review of Death, Stay Away  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (4.0)
This was interesting. A good effort. You stuck to the theme and kept a good pace. No zoning out, kept attention. Not bad at all. 4
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked this. Anything that praises GOD I like. This is quite eloquent, expressive. Worthy topic, worth my time reading. 4.5
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Review of Beautiful Rain  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I have reacted to this, but, should i share it? lol. Hrm. I found this playful. Provoking. Provocative. Feminist. I enjoyed it, like it was a game. Well that's how i reacted. 4
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I almost feel like I havent the right to review this. To have an opinion.. If this were a sound it would be a loud bang and a shudder as it has genuinely moved me. Very good, not laboured, and, the reader did not zone out. I think, although im no poet really, it's freeform? In any case this is certainly one of the best poems I've read lately. Hear my prayer: I am poverty.. I hear ya! HUG! BIG 5
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good. I especially like this, and, your opening verse. "dedicating this poem isnt as hard as it seems" was a meaningful and quite loaded statement i felt.. Very loving, very outward, very emotive. Clearly expressed with genuine words, i appreciated this one.. thanks 5
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (3.5)
To be honest i found this to be laboured. However it engendered very positive feelings. Was a sense of chase intended? Interesting read, thanks. 3.5
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Review of A Day of Rest  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your reference to rest at home is salient and understood with ease. Softly put, and, a pleasure to read. 4.5
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks. Mostly informed me, the reader, of how you view faith? Or some take on faith.. Thoughtful, something different. 4
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sensitive and kind. Engenders great meaning. Had a feeling of maturity about it.. and.. a feminine theme.
You always produce a refined, perfected, result.. Thanks Timothy. 5
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Review of Life's Lemons  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (5.0)
Haha. Very good. You really do have a way with words. Nice "sealed" delivery. From start to finish THIS was metered and engaging. Well worth the time, re-read it.. Love it.. 5
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Review of River of Life  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (5.0)
Once again very nice. Well communicated. Life is reciprocal, love is two way street. Thought provoking, got me thinking. I really do like your poetry Timothy. 5
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Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very eloquent. Meaningful. A more demanding, sophisticated read. I found this great! Highly devotional and genuine. I appreciated this very much 5
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Review of Sweet Anna  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (5.0)
mysterious. Thought provoking. Uplifting and enjoyable read. Well worth the time. 5
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Review of Loneliness  
Review by Peter Plum
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Really quite good. Your concluding verse was great! Worthwhile read, thanks.
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