Good. Worthy topic, worthwhile read. Held attention. Was salient and vital, and, although this was short it had, to this reader, great meaning. Very good.
Good! Just plain GOOD! Very well expressed with little occasion to find fault. A sense of joy, in particular, was clearly conveyed. I really did like this!
I found this gripped me from the beginning.. but.. "excitement soars at an all time low" seemed to me to be incoherant.. I may, of course, be wrong, but, i re-read it a few times and feel, at least to this reader, it is a.. laboured line.. May need re-work.
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