This poetry awarded first place. It had to be. A beautiful poetry. Poetry of love between albatross and the sailor who bartered his soul with a albatross. Albatross is a bird of sea , sentry of the lonely sky.Through conversation with the poet the huff or arrogance between sailor and albatross, comes out.
We the human being claim ourselves as the best species of all on earth,and really we are, but we do the misdeeds that even the other ignorant species don't. We have almost destroyed our planet for our greed,hatred,brutality. We now need to bring change, to some goodness. Good writing. It is hopeful that we started thinking about our misdeeds.
I read the article an I just heard my voice. At present may be there are lots of people are thinking these things. I want to give a hand of friendship with the author. You can read my "war and peace"an d you can listen my song "let us make it heaven" These are the expression of my feeling.There are lot of things to say. It will be better if we chat through email.
I would rather like to say the reason we existed. Now we are going to be perished for hatred.I want to remind those days of my boyhood,youth when people were of very different kind.Now through the world, especially people love money and wealth. There's no love for human being.Nice poetry and judgment.yoe we exist for love. That give us breath,hope, everything.good poetry.
The horse in the poetry, seems like rock n roll artist, named after Elvis presley and his handsome pose. He likes apple slice and treats like circus. But the poet don't like or want this. The poet don't expect he treat like circus. He wants to give him a snack as the necessity.A different and new theme in writing that I haven't found here before. Nice rhythm, good writing.
MC Gupta, a writer from my neighbouring country, who's poetry I read here before. A good writer, and this piece two. Good rhythm, I like it. Picture is common for couples or lovers after separation with each other.One leaving another for new relation or to the eternity, hurts very much.Long time but good relation hurts.
Recalling the memory of grandma, this poetry is also beautiful and rhythmic.She, the poets was a fancy woman, she rode tricycle till she became eighty two,till she was stopped, She loved flowers.she died and at her funeral pink carnation was given.The poet received plenty of gift.The poet learnt gardening where was his own favourite fragrance.
Well! Whistling. What?Is this the moon ?Moon whistling?
Very nice gift .I wish I could use this for my personal need.It could be more thrilling if some tune was added to this Got.And what is it in the corner? A bird? Is she listening the whistle? Very nice but to make more interesting sound is need to be added.
A poetry of love, good ,very good!The poet seems crazy in love. Forwarding increasingly and straight and with the madness.Love is like this if it goes on safe and nicely, life become meaningful. Human life is for this precious relationship. Without this relation life is worthless and empty. Like a heel or tree standing on one place no movement, no appeal, no laughter no joy, no achievement.
It is not clear to me the poet here talked about the monster and it's type. Is this any physical or psychological problem or some kind of frustration that was demolishing hopes and dreams. But it's good poetry, good rhythm and happy to learn the present time is going fine.
Well,this may be the first time I am reviewing an article.But I want say my personal feeling about God, it's just an imagination.I never believed in God.I believe some people just come to earth to be good,of course they are angel they are the hope inspiration everything. This persons are our last hope. If there was any God, all human being would have been the angel. But at present time we see demons, they are horrible. If there was any God these demons couldn't born even. Anyway,good topic for article. These type of subject needed to be discussed more and more.I wanted to be an angel but now I want to be demon,demon can finish demon.I want to say personally, I have lost all my interest for live as I saw billions and countless number of demons in my country and around me. I have only hate in my mind. I don't love anyone or anything.
A very realistic story like it's an autobiography. The story tells about struggle of life, and love,and getting up when life starts to drawn. Life also teaches us lessons, we come to know about people good and bad. Nice story or may I say an autobiography.
The tiny,isolated nation of English speakers in the heart of Europe is U.K that I know but subvanian? The story I read seemed like I woke up from sleep and knowing something knew that I never knew ! If this is any history for U.K well I have just learned.
This is a very good poetry,nothing to review, just need to understand the feelings. In the night we fell asleep in arms of the darkness turning off the light.when we don't weep anymore for pain and troubles in life.we sleep in peace. But before fell asleep we talk with oneself,like we talk to someone, whisper in the dark.talk of our grievance against someone or something. Very painful feeling.
It's the scene of a school premises. Summer Vega, Chloe and bully and teacher are the characters. Students fighting with each other, a very short event, too short for making any comment.Bully pushed Vega on the ground because Vega called him slut.episode ends here .
The story is about selling product of the company.Param and Tavern on behalf of company meeting with viswajit,and their bargaining process. As a former student of marketing I felt like I'm reading a book of "marketing" Tavern and Parameters trying to convince about the good quality of product,also came the question of echo system,law of the government. Parameters is like perfect marketer trying to low price of the product for consumer satisfection which is the main view of marketing . In marketing we say "profit through consumer satisfaction." Meet consumer demand with high quality product in low price. From this company can make profit and Param can get commission.His life could be fruitful and easier.
I read out the story again and again. But it's too hard English to comprehend .The story is about a couple Shiloh and Rey Hunter.On a chilly snowy night, wife Rey is missing, the writer kept the mystery whether Shiloh's wife was
kidnapped or was with another man."I'm not sure......We aren't married anymore."clear the picture. Rey is in different state, not in Montana with another man and Rey is not married to Shiloh anymore.
Don't know who is available for meeting, but my kind of, specially me, no writer, but wdc member is available all the time. Meet me whenever your heart wishes. I am always here at your service .😊 Couldn't understand is it poetry or story😂😂😂
Ha ha..About sixty year old gentleman body hit by car, is good meat ! Did I read correctly ! And be refrigerated and cut into pieces for selling in the butcher shop ! Oh ! And this is a project !😊.....Very funny. Did I understood the story clearly? That is humorous ! The part of the story very simply expressed the humour and I like it. And I'm giving..
Well, I became a little scared when the scene winked in my eyes, a boy, rather say a ghost ,walking around near the grave.He along with her parents were killed by serial killer.An army personnel learning all this who also met boy's father. They, the departed souls, meet every month to discuss about present time and what to do in the situation.One important message of the story is that not to disturb the departed souls by tourist as they rest in peace. Nice story written with the view to uphold some facts that usually matters the expired people. Nicely drawn the picture and I like it.
First, I could not understand what the poetry was about. Now it is little bit clear. The poet wants to talk about the blue river as we know from geography, Egypt was born newly for this,Egypt saw the light of civilization. God saying" daughter,....I'm bringing Egypt out of you. The poet giving importance to going back to wild and origin of us, the human being, to be purified, to be stronger than now, because we're having wrong ideas,thoughts, which is making us weak.
The poet here praising the stars, up above the sky.We live in this planet and can't see the whole galaxy, but the stars, billions of planets around them running, we can't see. But we see the stars which are actually like our sun. In the night they become stars, they move, fell down, make us romantic, make poet, make artist like Vincent Van gogh, the poet reminds us about the great starry night. Nice topic and also the poetry.
Dear Avanti, I think you are Indian, and so possibly you're making same mistake writing English as I did. The most important thing I have learnt 'the punctuation mark.'
I was making same mistake and I don't know still that have I made any correction.
You got to
give the full stop and comma after the word and then the space. Not early.
Every site and app asks to check this error. Please check this once again.
And with the objective you wrote this short article, this is a rule of this world. You must have heard one famous singer of your country, if you are Indian, Nochiketa, and his "Ami k
ono baul habo".
আর বড় যদি হতে চাও ছোট হও তবে।
Continue writing.
To survive in this world you need love and a buck. That is fact. We do everything for this love and buck. It's great poetry which encourages unemployed to work and life. A great way of the poet to raise confidence within oneself. Believe in you, you have tablet and give it a try. Either where is the solution? Very nice.
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