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Review of Winter Comfort  
Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A wonderful poem which tells about mother's dependability on his son. Awaiting with hopeful heart that he is coming back home. Because his warm presence is comfortable like spring with a little warmth after winter's bitter cold. He is like the sun shatters fear. Very nice poetry which shows the compatibility between nature and feeling and importance of presence of a son to his mother.


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Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (3.5)
'Life is a tale, told by an idiot.'All we do in lifetime, after death, all of it ends. All our time we run for our life, to build, to be someone, to to be something, but at last our life ends. Everything is smashed down. But where is the strength for living a life, to do something knowing all these? That is nicely briefed in the last para. We will do everything positive, and will have produced the things those are positive too. This will give us strength for living long life,to endure or tolerate the burden whole life.


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Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It was very hard for me to understand as I'm not familiar with English culture and literature. The story might be of about joining in the Hitler regiment. I'd seen this in the movie "Book Thief".How Adolf Hitler listed the adults to the regiment for war, against their will.The poetry clearly expressed the feeling and the thoughts came in mind who was joining the regiment. For the inauguration, there was military saying 'Heil Hitler. Betting life for no clear mission. Very good sketch of the scene, valuable words and the event of the world war II.


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Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Competition is always a perfect way to judge merit.Wherever the question comes of judgment of merit there must have to be a fair competition. In WDC it's also necessary, though I don't have merit.But I like the competition idea. Definitely it'll improve skill. But in my opinion I think as the prize it is needed to give money to the winners. I always dreamed to write. But when money comes first importance in life, and no gettable job do to for earning money, can't continue writing but writing can be helpful if it become a profession. If administration think and try to do something, not big amount, a very little amount, that give inspiration for working hard and can keep the candle burning for hope of life. Actually getting gift point and getting opportunity of buying goods can't help the problem that's what I want to say for consideration and humbly request to think my point of view. That's all.
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Review of Winter  
Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (1.5)
It's a clear picture of winter season of a country where temperature goes below the gero degree. Snow falls, people walks wearing boots and slade. Where fireplace give heat to be warm. In my country we become scared imagining the scene because in winter temperature remains above 10 degree. And it will be horrible scene to us if we see snow is falling. Because if the temperature goes below 10 degree, people die.


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Review of Practice!  
Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Well that is a realizatiOn.practice makes a person perfect.yes, when we learn something new we need to practice to become the thing easier.Even older thing which we do regularly, needs the regularity to maintain. It becomes harder when we start to do anything after a break. Seems like I never did it before.


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Review of The Dream  
Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Nice story,easy English easy for reading.The author is successful in sketching the scene,a nightmare and reaction is perfect even after waking up from the sleep.Adam's for head's bleeding,he's a former captain of the army.He was held hostage but it's not clear if Sarah was there or not.If it doesn't matter but anyone can have such nightmare from m constant anxiety about someone.It's not clear too how Adam is related to Sarah. But it don't matter. Nice writing.


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Review of Blindness  
Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Optimism,Ambition that keep us alive.But there are reasons of present time to be pessimist. Here is morbidity, diseases that demands to be extremist about too many things in the society.But optimist can't see or ignore, don't want to find reason for sadness of the pessimist society.That is told in the poetry.It's very nice and had pleasure.


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Review of Ocean  
Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (2.5)
It seem the author a lot of grief.Sorrow has depth like ocean.How many years can be with the water of ocean!He is talking to someone,may be the reader that he can even get drowned, sunk in the depth of water.Easiest one sentence to express pain.Very nice.


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Review of Mount Vesuvius  
Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The author in this poetry is talking about mistake or misdeed.Who's gonna forgive that's the question.He wants to rise up again.He wants to grow i newly in a turned back time.what mistake or misdeed that's not clear, but it seem like he regret for someone gave his life.


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Review of Internet  
Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (3.0)
A different topic on which, the part of the story is written.The pumpkin pies but we bandlab artists were preparing pumpkin spice in the October month for music contest.Anyway the author has picked up one factor that technology specially internet made the change, and selling through online,shopping has become easy.But in an undeveloped country like ours still these salesmen are annoying.But Alice giving poisonous liquid ?!?Tied to the car?Ha ha...Killing off traveling salesman?Oh!Yes,I've been learning old frozen food go bad.I like this writing.


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Review by proton69
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well,it seems the author has written a letter.And from this letter we see the picture of boyhood of the author,when lived separated from mother.Now the age is forty when the author's parents, grandma and pa is perished and the author have 5 kids.The author sketched a clear picture of mother's love and affection for what the author was even kidnapped.Excilent story with so many events as the author recalls and story progresses.easy English,I read very easily and had the felling of emotion.I wish I would write someday like this.


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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great.It's beyond making any comment.
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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (4.0)
Ha ha ha.....Very funny,but how was your food?Tasty?Such a funny fiction...Very good.I like it.I was busy to catch your idea,so didn't gave importance to grammar.But I enjoyed and can see the scene you are eating a giant lady's leg toe...Ha ha Rebecca...And you are slave for cleaning leg licking.... wak!chhih!shrink!Oh you sad sweaty legs but how the socks smell?Sorry for Jacob,he will have to stay long in doll house.I'm giving you 10 gift points,that I'm first giving to someone...Ha ha...And 4 stars,that is first too.
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Review by proton69
Rated: E | (2.5)
The subject matter is money.This is the age of money.If you want to buy a scarcity of things you need money.And you'll miss a lot.But if you don't give importance to consume.....Well that simple thing is written very well.Though I'm reading this as new reader and also in English,find not much things to improve.Because the author knows better than me.I'm just learning the things.The poem is very nice,and the passion expressed very nicely.Actually for this expression of passion it became a little unclear about the subject matter for a while.But then.....Nice poem.
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