|Wow! All the feels! Great use of imagery, detail, and symbolism. Though I can't speak for all readers, your work definitely moved me to the sadness and loneliness you aspired to bring to life. I'm curious to know if there could maybe be a second chapter/verse, one with a coming summer perhaps? Something to move your main character towards a new beginning? Much like when spring comes and brings new life, is there a possibility of new life for her? Please keep writing! I need to know!