I thought your poem here was beautiful. It was so emotionally written I nearly cried. A beautiful flow, great rhymes and rhythm. You expressed yourself so very well here. I enjoyed reading this through. The last two lines were very clever indeed. Great work and write on!!!
I thought this was a great piece of writing. I liked the inspiration coming from the words and lines. Nice structure, nice flowing rhythm. You have done a fine job here. I enjoyed reading this through. I found no way of improving the writing, it is fine the way it is. Good work and write on!!!
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I think you used the prompt very well here. You nailed it. Good work. I liked the intelligence you used to write this poem. I see you have written many 8 lined poems. You have a neat portfolio. Keep up the good work and write on!!
A nice little poem. I too have once written about spiders. Nice presentation, good flowing lines. An interesting read. A nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Spiders, eww. Good work and write on!!
Great rhymes here, good flowing rhythm too. I liked the poetic sway to this item. The title was a great match for the words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through. I know the contest say's 8 lines only but I would have loved to have read more from you. Good writing and well done. Write on !!
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I thought this was a lovely little poem. Filled with emotions running strong yet sad. You expressed yourself so very well here. This writing from you could easily be made into a song. I enjoyed the heart-felt feelings in this piece. You raised some important questions too. A good, emotional item. Write on!!
I thought you expressed yourself very well here. I enjoyed the darkness and depths of your writing. I liked the title, it summed up the item rather well. I also liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Keep expressing your inner self. Write on!!
I rather liked this piece from you. It was written very sweetly and well crafted. I liked the writing style. There was an element of pain in here from you. I think you expressed this very clearly. There were some nice romantic lines here too. Good work and write on!!!
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I also enjoyed the clever way you wrote this out. I think you expressed yourself so very well here in this piece. There were some clever lines too. The overall effect was rather good. Keep expressing and keep writing quality items.
I rather enjoyed reading your poem through. I liked the imagery that came along with the words and lines. Your word-crafting was excellent and painted a lovely, poetic picture. I liked the last few lines, they summed the writing up very well. Thank you for sharing your work here. Write on !!
I thought your little poem here was great. Your rhymes were fantastic and the flow was good. A nice happy little story in your poem and this made me smile. I like how you ended the poem. The title was fitting and also made me smile. Animals are so cute. Nice writing and good work. Write on!!
I thought this piece from you was great. Such a nice little poem to read through. I felt your love of little cats here. It is hard not to love a tiny kitten. I am glad this kitten found a home to live in and be loved. The poem was very sweet and positive. Good writing.
Beautiful written words here. Through your writing and poetry I have come to realise there is a ballance between states of mind and the body. The hardest thing is to stablise the two powers. The human mind, brain functions on many levels.
I thought your writing here was very pretty and expressive. You have a way with poetry and writing. Keep expressing and posting your items here. You have potential to be an even greater writer. I love your style. All your items have been very poetic and powerful. Good work and write on!!
I loved the imagery coming off these words and lines from you. Your expressive manner is very good. A very poetic swagger to this piece. I couldn't help but feel pain from you here. I could see a hurt and suffering female here, the pain of living. You are a neat little writer, keep expressing and venting. Good work and write on!!
I thought your poem here was excellent throughout. Lovely rhymes held here. Good flowing lines. There was fine art here in the way you wrote this out. It was very clever. Nice imagery came from the words and lines. I really enjoyed this great piece from you. Nice work and write on!!!
I liked the romantic sway in this piece from you. I think you expressed yourself very well here. A good length for a poem, not too long and not too short. This is why writing poetry is such a gift, it lets us vent our inner selves. Nice work and write on !!
I thought this poem from you was rather good. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice font and nice presentation on the page. There was a poetic power to your words and lines here. I was gripped from start to finish. I found no errors and no way to improve the item. Good work.
I liked the positivity of the story held here. I love cats with blue eyes, the Siamese breed are particulary wise and clever. A nice theme and nice fresh feeling to this poem. I liked the presentation too. A good length for a poem, not too long and not too short. Nice work.
I enjoyed reading this through. I believe there are angels in and around everyone too. Every human is special in their own unique way. Acts of kindness is an act of an angel. I liked this theme you chose. I liked the way you wrote this out and I also liked the positivity which came from the words and lines. Nice work.
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