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I enjoyed reading your item through. I liked how well you expressed yourself here in this poem. Anxiety is not a nice feeling so I sympathise with you. You were very creative with this item. I am glad you have coping procedures. Good work and write on!
I enjoyed reading your work through. You made me smile as I read this through. You were very creative in the way you wrote this poem out. I liked the style. The very last line was emotional to me, and a slice of reality. Good writing, keep going and welcome to writing.com. I too am from the United Kingdom. Write on!
Nice presentation, centered on the page. A good item to read through. I liked the angle you wrote this out with. There was an honourable feeling over me as I read this through. I think most army men will think like this. To be so proud of their country. Good work and write on!!
I enjoyed this little poem from you. It made me smile. You made me want to celebrate God even more than I do already. Nice form used, good presentation, nice font too. The length of the poem was good, it kept my attention levels up high. You also managed to say so much in just a few lines. Good work and write on!!
I thought your acrostic here was lovely. Well written and well displayed. There was a sweetness about this piece, describing nature in the form of a bird in Spring. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the title, summing up the theme very well. Good work and write on!!
Nicely written out and nicely presented. Good font used, it looked good. A lovely poem, nice flowing rhymes. Good poetic words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through. The title is inviting and matched the writings well. You are a good poet. Write on!!
I really liked the poetic sway to this little poem. I liked the effect this gave me as I read it through. It seemed to reflect my mood right now. Great imagery coming from each word and line. Nice writing, good job and a enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. Write on!!
I thought this poem from you was deep and dark. I like how you expressed yourself here. Writing things down and turning them into poetry is a helping release for the mind and soul. I hope you felt better for writing this poem. Love can be cruel sometimes.
Lovely expressive manner to your poem here. I liked the deepness of the meaning. Nice flowing structure in this writing. I enjoyed reading this through and it was a nice experience to me. Sad and emotional but very rewarding. Great writing and write on!!
I enjoyed this little poem from you here. Its length was perfect, you managed to say so much in just a few lines. There was a great poetic power over me as I read this through. Nice imagery came from the words and lines. Great writing and well done!!!
I thought your writing here was great. A very good theme with great meaning and emotions. Nicely presented, centered on the page. You managed to say so much in just a short poem. I agree, our lost ones will reach out to us, we just have to be ready and waiting to see this. Nice work and write on!!
I really liked the theme of this poem from you. It was very deep, special and spiritual. The meaning was great. You wrote this out very well and no errors were found. I was incaptivated as I read this through. You really do have a great imagination here. Great writing and write on !!
There was a sad and heart-felt tone to your writing here. You opened up my eyes to what you go through every day and every night. A special poem from you, describing night time with so much power. No way to improve the writing, it is fine the way it is. God Bless you.
I thought this little item from you was amazing. I loved the philisophical power used here. The imagery that came of the words and lines was awesome. The title was fitting for the writing. This is the best piece I have read today. I loved the overall feeling you gave me here. I am very impressed with this item from you. Amen and write on!
Great expressions here from you. I liked how I felt your honesty in this piece. There was a nice poetic sway to this poem. I liked the complexitiy of each line and the complex way you wrote this out. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!
I thought this was a sweet little item but had a sad and emotional twist to it. You ended the item with positivity and hope. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!!
Aww, nice writing here from you. A lovely little poem to read through. Nice poetic flow, good word crafting and good rhythm. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked how you ended the 2nd and 3rd stanza, these words made the poem come alive with great imagery. Good work and write on!!
I enjoyed reading this little item through. It was a very loving and positive item. There was a lot said in just a few lines. I felt humbled and warm by the care and respect in each line written. Nice writing and thank you for sharing it here. Write on!!
I liked the innocent theme to this poem. You also wrote this out very well. Good flowing lines, good rhythm and good rhymes. Your gratitude was very evident, enrolling God into your thanks. Fact or fiction this was a nice read and was fun to experience. Good work and write on!
I thought your poem here was very simple and easy to follow. I liked the warming feel of the last line. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. You told a mini story here and it was inviting to me. I enjoyed this little piece very much. Write on!
A nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. A well expressed item from you. Good flowing rhymes and rhythm. A good subject to write about. I think everyone here would relate well to what you wrote out. Every writer has written an item on writing. Good work and write on!!
I find this subject you wrote of to be very interesting indeed. Your authors notes were so correct and fact filled truth. The poem had good rhymes, good flow, good rhythm. The picture above the writing was a superb touch and made the writing so much more thrilling. I too have written a poem on the same picture and I called it Earthrise. A beautiful thought it is to know how big the universe is and indeed other univereses. A great poem, write on!
I enjoyed the depth of your writing here. You were not affraid to express your inner self. I really liked how you ended the poem, it made me smile and caught me off guard. A good length for a poem and you managed to say a lot in just a few lines. A good read and it helped getting to know you better. write on!
I thought this was very deep and expressive from you. I am pleased the love is still there even after seperation. I enjoyed reading this through. Although the theme of this writing was dark, there was a positive vibe coming from each word and line. It was like you are both still in contact, quite beautiful to me. Nice work and write on!
You described a condition very well here in this item. I liked the dark tone to this poem. My favourite line was this; "Worthless brain has lost all human thought"..... I liked it because I too suffer from the same happening. Like a fuzz in the mind. You expressed yourself very well here. Good work and write on!
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