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I thought your writing here was funny and also cute. Life through the eyes of a tick. A great, original theme. Nice flow, nice structure. A different type of poem than I am used to but great all the same. Keep writing and posting. Write on!!
I thought your writing here was special and heart warming. Your emotions were powerful and the meaning of this letter was very sensitive. Your expressive manner was great. I did feel emotional as I read this through. Nice writing and I am sorry for your loss. Write on !!
I felt the emotions running high in this poem from you. The sadness was strong. You wrote this out very well. The structure was good, the flow was good too. Nice font used. I am sorry for your loss if this is the case. Nice expressive tone to your work. Write on !!
I liked your writing style here in this piece. The flow and rhythm were great. I couldn't help but feel a kind of philsophical power here, a mind conditioning. A nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. You are good at writing positive poems. Good work and write on!!
I thought your little piece here was nice. I liked how you ended the item. It was indeed very positive. A nice poetic power here. Great size for a poem, not too long and not too short. I smiled as I read this through. Good work and write on !!!
I liked your poetic manner here in the way you presented this piece. The title was sweet and was fitting for the words and lines. You made me think as I read this through. There was a kind of sweetish romantic sway here. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work and write on!!
I liked the theme of your item here. I could feel the positivity coming from each line. A mini speach of hope and glory here. I also liked the poetic power from this piece. The title is very rewarding and gives me a sign of wonder and posibilities. Nice creative theme. Good work and write on!!
I thought your writing here was very expressive indeed. I related very well to everything you wrote down here. Isn't life fun? The darkness in your poem here was inviting to me becuase I have very troubled times too. I fight a war a cannot win and it goes round in circles, every day, every year. The art of writing helps the mind unwind and you wrote a very clear message here. Keep expressing yourself, others will read your work and comment.
I thought your poem here was beautiful. It was so emotionally written I nearly cried. A beautiful flow, great rhymes and rhythm. You expressed yourself so very well here. I enjoyed reading this through. The last two lines were very clever indeed. Great work and write on!!!
I thought this was a great piece of writing. I liked the inspiration coming from the words and lines. Nice structure, nice flowing rhythm. You have done a fine job here. I enjoyed reading this through. I found no way of improving the writing, it is fine the way it is. Good work and write on!!!
I thought this item from you was very gripping indeed. Fact or fiction, it is a very meaningful piece of writing. There was deep feelings and inspiration over me as I read this through. Dark? yes, but very harrowing and special. Your grammar was perfect. Great writing and well executed. Write on!!
Yes, I loved this little poem from you. Great writing style. I liked the poetic way this hit me. Good imagery came from the words and lines. I am going to award this little beauty with a ribbon. I am enjoying your port so far. Write on !!
I think you used the prompt very well here. You nailed it. Good work. I liked the intelligence you used to write this poem. I see you have written many 8 lined poems. You have a neat portfolio. Keep up the good work and write on!!
A nice little poem. I too have once written about spiders. Nice presentation, good flowing lines. An interesting read. A nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Spiders, eww. Good work and write on!!
Great rhymes here, good flowing rhythm too. I liked the poetic sway to this item. The title was a great match for the words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through. I know the contest say's 8 lines only but I would have loved to have read more from you. Good writing and well done. Write on !!
I thought you were very creative with this item. I liked the form you used. There was good rhythm to this piece from you. There was good imagery coming off the words and lines. I really enjoyed reading this through. Nice writing and well done!!!
I thought your little poem here was lovely. It was well written with great rhymes and rhythm. A sweet little item to read through. A good length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. You did a fine job here and the item deserves 5 stars. Write on!!
I thought your little poem here was very cute to read through. I smiled as I read it. A simple, light hearted item that brought happiness to me. This form always leaves me wanting to read more. A nice refreshing piece from you. Good work and write on!!
I thought this was a lovely little poem. Filled with emotions running strong yet sad. You expressed yourself so very well here. This writing from you could easily be made into a song. I enjoyed the heart-felt feelings in this piece. You raised some important questions too. A good, emotional item. Write on!!
I thought you expressed yourself very well here. I enjoyed the darkness and depths of your writing. I liked the title, it summed up the item rather well. I also liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Keep expressing your inner self. Write on!!
I rather liked this piece from you. It was written very sweetly and well crafted. I liked the writing style. There was an element of pain in here from you. I think you expressed this very clearly. There were some nice romantic lines here too. Good work and write on!!!
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I also enjoyed the clever way you wrote this out. I think you expressed yourself so very well here in this piece. There were some clever lines too. The overall effect was rather good. Keep expressing and keep writing quality items.
I rather enjoyed reading your poem through. I liked the imagery that came along with the words and lines. Your word-crafting was excellent and painted a lovely, poetic picture. I liked the last few lines, they summed the writing up very well. Thank you for sharing your work here. Write on !!
I thought your little poem here was great. Your rhymes were fantastic and the flow was good. A nice happy little story in your poem and this made me smile. I like how you ended the poem. The title was fitting and also made me smile. Animals are so cute. Nice writing and good work. Write on!!
I thought this piece from you was great. Such a nice little poem to read through. I felt your love of little cats here. It is hard not to love a tiny kitten. I am glad this kitten found a home to live in and be loved. The poem was very sweet and positive. Good writing.
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