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This is written perfectly and flowed along so very well. You are a great writer here. Your expressive words and lines bring a poetic power to me. Love is love in any gender. I enjoyed the romantic ride of this piece, it was very sweet. Good work and write on!!!
Aww, I thought this was a beauitful piece of writing. The flowing rhymes made the writing so good and easy to read through. A lovely poetic sway and power here. The love, the spirit, the heart was all used to write this piece, great work. I loved it. Such a sweet poem. Well done!!
I thought your little poem here was nice, sweet and romantic. You made me wonder if women love any different to males. My guess is that love is love no matter what the gender be. This was a nice expressive piece and was rather humbling. I enjoyed reading this through. Keep writing.
Lovely writing here. The poetic sway was great. I loved how you ended the poem, it kind of made me emotional. The imagery was great. A sweet, humbling piece of writing. You expressed yourself so very well. Nice length for the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed this work from you. Write on!!
I thought this item from you held great positivity and reward. The imagery that came along with the words and lines was special. You painted a fantastic picture with your words here. A lovely, innocent poem, filled with joy and care and promise. Good work and write on !!!
I enjoyed reading your item through. It was very mystic and powerful. I enjoyed the dreamy words and lines you wrote out. A simple ending and was very humbling. I would have loved this item to be longer, I was gripped to the poetic sway here. Nice work and keep writing.
Well written and executed. Lovely romantic sway in here. I agree, A womans eyes paints a thousand words and emotions. Your little item here left me wanting to read more of this. I felt inspired reading this through. They say less is more. An enjoyable read, thank you. Write on !!!
After reading your little story through, I felt proud to be English and live in England. It is nice here but the weather is always cold. I understood the liking of the English accent, we brits feel the same about the Amercian accent, so warming. You mentioned Princess Diana, I have seen Diana in the flesh, she came to my historic town for a visit and she walked past me making eye contact. She was very tall and vibrant. Your story held the power of dreams and fantasy. It was very refreshing for me. Nice writing.
I thought you expressed yourself so very clearly. I wondered why you are in so much pain and what has happened to you. This writing held good rhymes, good flowing rhythm. The structure was great, the flow was great too. Keep expressing yourself through poetry and writing. You have a good skill here. Write on!!
I thought this poem from you was very gripping to me. The depth and meaning was great. You wrote this out very well. To me you placed a lot of emotion in this piece and it was written from the heart. Amen to your writing skills. I really enjoyed reading this through and you lifted my spirits with hope you brought. Good work and write on!!!
I thought your poem here was beautiful. Written very well and nicely presented center of the page. There was a lovely poetic power to your words here and it flowed along perfectly. Nice word crafting and good subject to write about. I enjoyed reading this poem through. Good work and write on!!!
I liked the simplicity of this poem from you. The romance was lovely and well described. The begining of love at the sea, how sweet and beautiful. I liked the length of your poem, it kept my attention levels up high. This was a nice and enjoyable read, thank you for posting. Good work.
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I loved the beauty of this poem too. You captured the moment of first light very well. The length of the poem was inviting, it kept my attention levels up high. I think everyone who reads this will agree with what you wrote out. Good work and write on!!!
I thought your little poem here was simple and very effective. Nice flowing rhythm. I liked the title, it drew me in to the poem. It is only fitting that we write such respectful poems to celebrate our treasured ones. You did a fine job here. I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought it was rather good and worth 5 stars. I think every writer can relate to what you have written. I enjoyed reading this through. You set a scene very well, making me want to write a piece. So thank you for the inspiration.
I liked how this poem was written. Good flowing lines. Good rhymes and rhythm. I really liked how this piece unravelled at the end, it was a lovely surprise. A well expressed piece of writing and had great meaning. I enjoyed reading this work through. Good work and write on!!!
I thought this piece from you was great, it made me smile. Great rhymes, great flowing lines. I see you got your awardicon for this poem, good work. The originality of the poem was superior. I have not read a piece with this kind of humor in it. Good work and write on!!!
I thought you expressed yourself so very well here. The dark side to this poem was great. I also liked how you ended the poem. The last line was good. I enjoyed reading this poem through. The poem was well executed and presented. Good work and write on!!!
I thought your poem here was great. I loved the journey you undertook. There was a triumphant feeling across me as I read this through. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the length of the poem too, it kept my attention levels high. Good work, write on!!!
This was a dramatic occassion for you all. Nicely written and conveyed. I am glad you all made it home. Experiences like this can stay with us for many years and can change the future. A real-life situation here made this enjoyable to read through. I am glad it all ended well. Thank you for sharing this story.
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I thought this poem was lovely. There was such a beautiful flow to each word and line. The poetic power was lovely. There was also a lot of innocense coming from each line. You are a great little writer. This poem left me wanting to read more and more of this. It was very addictive. Good work and write on!!!
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I thought the rhymes in this piece were perfect, they helped the flow of the poem very well. There was lots of positivity here and much love. I felt humbled as I read this through. Great presentation and looks good centered on the page. You mentioned how the love and togetherness can see you both through the darkness, this summed love up very well. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem. Good work.
I thought your poem here was great, I really enjoyed reading it through. The theme was unique and inviting. I loved the title and also loved the humorous lines. There was a lovely sense of happiness over me as I read this through. Good writing and well done...
I thought this was a lovely little poem. So cute the way you wrote this out. Nice rolling rhymes, great flow and rhythm. The affection was clear and the love and desire was evident here. A simple yet effective poem, and spoke to my heart. I felt the love you have for this person. No errors and punctuation errors found. Cute writing. Well done!!!
This was a very precise item indeed, very detailed. We all know for lovers to be at their best and for love to thrive it needs to be a two-way street. Give and recieve without question. Love lost has to be the most dangerous experience one can go through. It can lead to suicide in the extreme. On the other hand, love found is the highest of all emotions. The world becomes brighter.
After reading your item and thinking about it, it is nice not to be too deep in love. This way the heart is safe but on the flip side, also alone.
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