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Great rhyme and flow to your poem here. The flow was almost musical and it was very joyful. Lovely descriptive words and lines. I do believe special things happen in summers evening, where the sun sets with love for all. I enjoyed reading your poem through. Good work.
I thought your poem here was very original by theme. I liked the way you ended this writing, you made me smile. The imagery coming from your words and lines was great. A nice refreshing piece of work from you. The title was fitting for the poem. Nice work and write on!!!
I love your positivity here in this writing. Your mindset is always so happy and vibrant. I believe in miracles too. I think people could learn from you how to conduct themselves. A positive outlook is always a good start. Yes, writing.com is an awesome website for writers.
After reading this through, I felt an immense sense of freedom. I loved your carefree attitude here. There was great imagery coming from this little poem. It seems like you lived your younger years to the fullest. An interesting story to write about. I enjoyed it all.
I thought your writing here was great, I was gripped to every word and line. Your grammar and story telling was good. You painted a lovely picture with your words. The philosophy was indeed special. The length of the story was inviting and kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this work through.
Wow, this was an amazing piece of writing. I loved the flow and the rhymes were great. A lavish feel to this poem. This writing cannot be improved, it is perfect the way it is. It sounds like we have the same souls, vibrant, deep, powerful. I loved the poetic sway about this poem. It was beautiful to read through. Great work and write on!!!
I enjoyed reading your story through. The grammar flowed smoothly and you told the story very well. There was great imagery coming from the words and lines. I did however find the story to be beauitful in the begining but very, very sad in the end. Good work and write on!!!
The meaning of this poem was lovely. Such a beautiful piece of writing. Your rhymes were great and the flow was amazing. I really enjoyed reading this through. A warming, heartfelt poem. The poem is written from fact and that makes it special. Good work.
I thought this was written perfectly. There was a beauty about this poem from you. The love was deep and I felt the romance growing and dying at the same time. I also felt the pain of a love that has lost its way. Lovely expressions, lovely tone to your work here. Nice flowing poem. Good work.
I thought this poem from you was excellent. I loved how well you expressed yourself. I also related very well to what you had written. Fact or fiction this was a lovely read. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I hope you find peace soon. Good writing.
I thought your little poem was very funny. I dont know if you meant to be funny, its just how I percieved you. I would like to know what you have to surrender to? The art of writing poetry and expressing oneself was very evident here. I enjoyed reading your poem through. Good work.
Nicely written and nicely executed. Good word flow and good rhythm and rhyme. I liked the depth of this piece from you. I took comfort in knowing that I am not the only one who holds back words and feelings, although different circumstances. A great piece written from honesty and with power. Good work and write on!!!
I read this piece through and related to the philosophy used here. I liked the depth of the subject. This is a poem for people who think deeply and understand what lay ahead for youngsters. You made me think of my own life and how it has passed me by so quickly. Looking back to the school days, playing in the playground, maybe some of us are not ready for adulthood. A very thought provoking piece. Good work.
I thought this was quite well written, better than you gave yourself credit for. The title drew me in and the words to the poem were quite rewarding. It goes to show that not everyone is living a blissful life, now, then or tomorrow. I think you expressed yourself very clearly and I enjoyed reading this through. Keep writing, posting and expressing yourself.
I thought this was written perfectly, lovely poetic sway and power. You have a good sense for mystic poetry and have good word crafting skills. I really enjoyed reading this poem through. I found no way of improving your item, it was great the way it is. Good writing and good work.
I thought this was a lovely little poem from you. Great flowing rhymes, great rhythm too. There was a poetic power to your poem here. The title matched the poems words and lines so very well. I really enjoyed reading this through. I liked the philosophy used in this poem. Good work and write on!!!
I thought your little piece of writing here was interesting. The originality of what you decided to write about was great. A believer will welcome this poem from you, as do I. The philosophy that time repeats itself. A nice spiritual feeling came across me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!!
See, this poem from you is why I come to writing.com. When I review, I hope to find a beauitful piece of writing. I did just that, I found this poem from you to be swift, lavish, pretty and special. The rainfall does have a scent and it brings life to the world. A beauitful poem from you. I loved the poetic power.
I thought your poem here was nice, I enjoyed the flowing rhythm. The poem had good structure and was well ballanced. I think you described the love of music quite well here, I particually liked the knee slapping line. Music can heal and roll along side our pains very well. I enjoyed reading this through, good work.
I related so very well to your writing here. At 51 I feel I am decaying too. A good, original theme for a poem. I liked your honesty here. A nice length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!!
I thought the first stanza, the introduction, was beauitfully written and displayed. I loved the inspiration you gave me here. The twilight, the shadows and night was lovely. A sweet little piece of writing and I enjoyed reading this through. For a brief moment in time I was taken away from daily life. Good work and write on!!!
I liked your expressions here in this piece from you. The love was real and it seems like your partner is committed to you. As long as you are both nice to each other you both will be fine. Nice rhythm to your writing here. I related to what you had written out. Nice work and write on!!
I thought there were some honest lines in your writing. Addmitting that mother-hood can be a test. The love for your son here was evident and rewarding. I liked the simplicity of this poem from you. The title was fitting for your words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through. Good expressions.
I thought your writing here was rather good. I thought the picture with the words and lines was lovely. Nice desriptive words. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem and wouldn't change a thing. Good writing, nice work.
I liked the original theme of this piece from you. I liked the way you wrote this out too. The spooky feeling was real and vivid. Good inspiration came from this piece. A simple and easy poem to follow and understand. I liked the overall effect. Good work and write on !!
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