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Review of Horizon  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey, I really like perusing. One thing, though, the ending was a bit abrupt, and I found myself wanting to know more. Good job. Have a good one and keep writing.
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Review of Paige's Pages  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I really did fall for Paige—it was such a fascinating read. The words flowed together beautifully, and I was hooked, eager to know how it would end. The only thing I noticed was a bit of repetition in places, which I found myself skimming through. But overall, I absolutely loved it. Have a good one, and please keep writing!
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
It was quite an interesting read. Kept me hooked till the last line. I wanted to know what actually transpired. Enjoyed it; loved Grandma and Grandpa too. Have a good one and keep writing.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
It's beautiful and very creative. It resonated with me. Gorgeous verbiage. Grammar is also spot on. Keep writing, have a good one.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It was truly enlightening—I had no idea about this before. Thank you for sharing. I feel a little more informed now, and I hope you keep writing.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hey, I would love to read more. The pace and rhythm are spot on, and the verbiage feels organic and beautiful. It is a pretty catchy read. The grammar is in place, too. I really enjoyed reading it and hope you’ll continue to share as the piece unfolds. Keep writing and have a good one!
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved reading this. The way you capture the world ripping at its seams is both poignant and thought-provoking. The contrasts you draw make the piece stand out even more. Perhaps we all need to play our parts more actively. Thank you for sharing — and please, keep writing.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is pretty singular and amazing.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Nice read, Grammar is in place, and so is the flow. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
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Review of Soldiers Betrayed  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting premise! I liked reading it. Well done, keep writing! Have a good one.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is sweet. Good job, keep writing!
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Review of Inner Turmoil  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice read. Subtle but has maybe a spiritual undertone, which I liked. Actually, it can be interpreted in a bunch of ways. Well done. Keep writing!
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Totally awesome. You clearly have a way with words. I have woven an interesting narrative. Hope there is more to come. Great work, keep writing!
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really loved it, hope it turns into a book. I'd buy it. Great job, keep writing.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
It is kind of bittersweet. A refreshing read. Well done, keep writing!
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Review of The Yellow wall  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This looks promising. I liked reading it. Well done, keep writing.
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Review of the elephants  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The verbiage is interesting. You can work on the flow a bit. Good job, keep writing.
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Review of Sleepy Cow  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is sweet. Well done. Keep writing!
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
It is quite poignant. I do hope you will keep opting for creative outlets. And good job, keep writing.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's really sweet and well-written. Thank you for sharing the sentiment. it does resonate. Keep writing!
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Review of meet me someday  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice. Build on it, that would be interesting. So far, so good. Keep writing!
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Review of her writing desk  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good job! It is grim but not in the least dull. I liked it. Keep writing.
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed reading this piece. The flow is phenomenal, and the characters are both believable and endearing. You’ve successfully transformed a heavy theme into something lighthearted. Very well done! I’d love to read more of your work, so please keep writing and sharing. Good luck!
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Review of Talk to Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey, this piece is beautiful and deeply heartfelt. It resonated with me on many levels. I’m genuinely glad you’ve found a constructive outlet amid all the mayhem and noise in your head. Please don’t make it private—you deserve to be read. Good job, thank you for sharing. Keep writing!

Regards
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Review by Ra M Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
It’s nice, though I feel it could use a little more soul. The rhythm isn’t seamless yet—the words don’t quite roll off the tongue. Overall, it’s not bad at all, but perhaps you need to sit with it a bit longer to make it truly resonate. Keep writing!
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