Well for one think, I am not an expert of poetry, though I really like this poem that you have for me. It just gives me emotions of going somewhere or going back. The only problem I want to address is how it relies on the title. If the title is not there, I would have interpreted in a different way. However, that is just a personal nitpick.
Overall, I really do like your poem for the emotions that it gave me.
Something tells me that you are trying to express your emotional feeling and thoughts in this poem. I guess it's my interpretation as I get this feeling from you. I do find your poem to have this beauty in it, but it's not just a physical kind of beauty, but rather this feeling. I feel that this poem is beautiful, but I cannot describe it well.
Overall, I feel beauty in your poem and an emphasis on your feelings. I might be wrong for my interpretation.
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