|First, let me say that I am not a professional. This review is just a personal opinion that I am sharing with you. If anything in this review is deemed unhelpful, please discard.
FIRST IMPRESSION: I came across this item on the "Read and Review" page. Honestly, I only clicked on it because I misread your handle. 🤣 I thought it was a play on Cthulhu and wanted to see what you created. But hey, I'm here now!
LIKES: Two things, actually I like the use of repetition. It helps to drive home the point and works well here. Next, the F-bombs. Too often writers are afraid to use profanity, but I think that they are just like any other word. If you can use it correctly, you should. If not, learn how to use it correctly.
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION: Punctuation is subjective in poetry, but I didn't notice any issues that screw up the poem.
STYLE/VOICE: My favorite thing about this piece is the raw honesty with which you expose yourself. I've met writers that pretended to be revealing themselves because they were too...insecure, shy..I don't know, whatever to be vulnerable. (Unless of course, this poem has nothing whatsoever to do with you. In that case, well done for conveying such emotion!)
SUGGESTIONS: My only suggestions are not with the actual poem. First of all, ignore the one-star rating that other asshole left. I have my ratings turned off because of crap like that. A reminder to add a third genre. It will help your work be seen more often and by a wider audience. The only other suggestion is to add a cover photo. If you don't have one of your own to use, the SM has uploaded a shitload of pictures for us to use.
FINAL THOUGHTS: Overall, you've crafted an emotional poem that tugs at something deep inside me. I can't wait to see more of your portfolio.
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