Tim Chiu,
My friend, this is a cute little poem, my friend. It goes so good with the sports that it talks about. It also talks about politics and we both know that is a game. I found no errors in its entirety. there was good flow and rhyming to the poem.
Queens
Oldwarrior,
My friend, I have seen a picture of you here on writing.com and you look real good. I'm glad you wore your dressed blues to your meeting, my friend. Your speech was well spoken I bet, too. Thank you for sharing this story with me, Oldwarrior.
Queens
Justin,
My friend, Yes, love can become a bad thing sometimes if you let it get out of hand. People swear they love someone, but really don't care at all. When it comes to war and love all is fair. So say most people that play the game. Thanks for sharing the story with me.
Queens
LittleLambie,
My friend, Yes, I imagine there are a lot of Eskimos in Siberia. I thought this was a good try of you for writing poetry. You can make a good poet if you write about good subjects of interest to the members. That makes the good poet from others.
Queens
P. Parker,
My friend, I thought your story covered a lot of details about its entirety. You left no doubt as to what you meant in your details of the story. A very complete and finished story you wrote for the reader to read. I found no errors and the story was good.
Queens
darkflame8,
My friend, I thought your story was well written about the missiles and the death toll was enormous. Thank you for writing this for members to read. All this could have taken place with the same results. Thanks for sharing the story with me.
Queens
Fenris,
My friend, I found your story to be quiet interesting and well written. For a moment I thought it to be a factual story of the earthquakes. Still I enjoyed the read about Earth's inner core. This would have been a story to extend somewhat, Thank you.
Queens
Dawn Embers,
My friend, this is a short poem you have written here. I'm a little confused as to what you are talking about. If you will explain I will certainly listen to you, Thank you. I do like the format of the poem though. Thank you for sharing this poem with me.
Queens.
adt2017,
My friend, Yes blue is a beautiful color I think. For all the reasons you mentioned and more blue is beautiful. You did a good job about mentioning all that you did writing your story. I found no errors in the whole story. Thanks for posting it on writing.com.
Queens
cookson2,
My friend, yes, it is terrible how some people live in this filthy world. It is naturally hard on the children growing up in such filth. I guess that is why so many die of bad water and poor food. Thank you for bringing this story out and public.
Queens
Fyn,
My friend, This is a nice study of the galaxy around us. With a lot of love mix in for you and your other. I was reading about they recently have discovered a new planet. What happen to Pluto? You used nice words to explain your poem, no mistakes.
Queens
Arakun the twisted raccoon,
My friend, This is a nice little story about having a picnic by the lake, with your daughter Sylvia. It sounds like you had a good time there at the lake. I found no mistakes in your story at all. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Queens
davii,
My friend, I read your story about having a stay over at your friends. I did not find mistakes at all. The only thing I would do is add to the story and make it much longer. You have a good start for an interesting story about you friends. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Queens
GauravG,
My friend, I know the feeling loving someone without them knowing it. To me that is a very strong love the longer you're a part the stronger the love becomes. Varun was lucky he finally wound up with, Nina. I noticed your note at the bottom of the page. WAS NINA AN ACID ATTACT SURVIVOR?
Queens
Lou-Five Books,
My friend, You are indeed a very special person, my friend. Saving the dogs who have been condemned for death. That is a lovely thing to do for them. I see some of these commercials
on TV about the dogs being left in the cold outside and it makes me cry. Thanks for sharing this with me.
Queens
Ally Cat,
My friend, this is a well written poem about your grandpa, my friend. The love you possessed for him shows in the words you used to write the poem. He must have been a gentleman at all times? He was very sweet to show you his true self. They don't make men like that anymore.
Good poem, Queens
Thank you Whome,
My friend, This is a common problem most of we writers have. You done a good job explaining all your problems. Thank you for sharing it with me. I hope you get what you wish for so you can write in peace. Write On!, and add to your port, my friend.
Queens
LilLadyBug,
My friend, this is a well written poem about your lover. The rhyming and flow had a good rhythm to it. I detected no errors at all.
Kings (Carl)
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