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Review by RaineLance
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It sounds very catchy and sucked me in the second I started reading. This is something I would most deffinetly read and you should really finish it or add no chapters. I would most surely come back to read more.
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Review of No Name  
Review by RaineLance
Rated: E | (3.5)
Eyes that sees beyond the words, In this part I think it should be see not sees. But other than that very nice work!

-Raine
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Review of My Last Poem  
Review by RaineLance
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow truly deep and engrossing, I found my self hanging on every word! Lovely!

-Raine
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Review by RaineLance
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice.......

-Raine
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Review of I Hate Zombies  
Review by RaineLance
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh my gosh I loved this! I love all things zombies especially when the main character is a woman who is badass! I think It shows Girl power!! haha You should really consider writing a short story on this or a long one I don't know? I Just know that if you did I would most defiantly read it!! Please Consider it, your very talented.

- Raine
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Review of Phantoms  
Review by RaineLance
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think that we all can relate to this poem.

- Raine
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Review of Love is not  
Review by RaineLance
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very deep, altough you should consider making it into a poem. I Loved this alot! Its so true and insightful.
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Review of Natural Disasters  
Review by RaineLance
Rated: E | (3.5)
I felt like the line "A windmillbduring a tornado" didnt really flow with the poem, you should also maybe add some commas to give the readers pause. Other than those to minor things, the poem was really nice. I could feel the anxiousness of just wanting to be accepted and loved, and feel that in some weird way everyone can relate.

-Raine
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Review by RaineLance
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Absolutly Brilliant!
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Review of The War Academy  
Review by RaineLance
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I enjoyed it alot, if anything I think you should add more descriptive sentences, you know describe how everything looks, to paint an image for the readers mind. Other than that I say Bravo I loved and enjoyed every second of it! The begining had me laughing a bit since you referd to rain so much and my names Raine haha unfortunatly one of the downsides of having such an unusual name.

Much love, Raine

P.S. Def. consider wrighting some fantasy novels, I absolutly love all type of fantasy and would most surely buy a copy :)
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Review by RaineLance
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
Umm Hi Im Raine im 14 and love to write it makes my day when anyone takes the time to review my stuff... I enjoy getting critiqued as i want to improve my writing so please take a minute to just read my stuff please! more to come note this is just the begining :)
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Review of Whisper Of A Name  
Review by RaineLance
Rated: E | (5.0)
What was the name!!! haha otherwise I actually loved this short story very much, 5 stars!
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