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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think nothing can be done towards this, call me negative but not in this administration's era. I am an Arab with a brother who left Santa Barbara, CA in which he lived for 7 years because he was harrased by authority too much being a frequent visitor to the mosque.

No freedom of relegion is available to him, so he couldn't live in such a hypocritical society.


Such a man should be welcomed, his work might promote peace in the US but he obviously isn't. Great piece of work

God Bless America,
She Needs it
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I consent to almost all of what you say, I come from a little place called Jordan, the country had a foreign debt of around $9 Billion, but had investments internally worth about $6 Billion, not that bad relatively.

The IMF told Jordan to pay up, Jordan had to sell it's telecommunication company, Jordan Telecom, to France Telecom for around $500 Million, its annual profits: $300 million. France a major shareholder in France Telecom, canceled the 500 mil from our debt and gave us foreign aid worth of another 200 mil.

It's always the case, corrupt government gives in and becomes a financial miracle, but decent government that doesnt cave becomes either a terrorist state or illegible for aid.

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Review of Everybody's Dad  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well put, As a middle-eastern we saw alot when George W. Bush was running, we felt alot when he won, and when he picked Ramsfield and Collen Powell we knew alot.

It is not uncommon in our part of the world where "Republics" get a president who is the son of a late president. It is a monarchy in a sense, but think of this, we had less Retribution caused by such sons in their ever-extending terms than GWB did in his 2 terms.

Hoping that I don't sound like him
God Bless America, Sincerely
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very lively and very youthful, I usually am a fan of details but you managed to skip out on details without making the story dull, nice work

example:
“Get Philip.”

Green got him.

or another example:

They also ran. And running told them to stop, so they did.

I liked alot of things about this story and wouldnt change much about it, especially not the way events roll over. Good Job
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like your careless atitude towards life,

but I'm just passing through,
so it really doesn't matter.

It is really interesting how you figured out things in life that take people years and then used them in a matter-of-fact style

We all have to protect ourselves.

Thats a pretty strong statement
keep going
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I think that your use of the autoreward feature of this site is wrong and that using it for advertisement could have been done via numerous ways including the use of sponsorship of items as other companies do. I am interested and will visit you site but that doesn't justify the way you used this site.
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Review of A Self  
Rated: E | (4.0)
That sizes humans just about right, I think you have raw talent, I also think you should maintain such language in writing. I think that our world needs writers like you that understand whats going on but genraly say it in abstract.

That makes us less vunerable to mind play. Thank you and keep going
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Review of Lost in Life  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I was in a simlar point in life, I was making more than $2.1 million a year and quit, just quit because I needed to find myself and my soul.

I definitaly could see how this James felt and since he started something he loved, he definitly would have a new take on life.

I picked up writing giving up my billion dollar dream, you captured the essence of such life beatifully.

But for the time being, the apartment in New York would remain vacant and his portfolio would remain untouched.

I am touched and can relate for the first time since I quit, I am surprised anyone can understand, I didnt find it yet in the real world but as long as there are writers like you, I am glad.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Reviewing is great, now that i discovered, it is contagious as you said, and trust me if it wasnt for gps I wouldnt have startesd, GPs do help in most of the times.

I am surprised by the number of people offering constructive critism, I wish i found this place earlier
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Review of Item Statistics  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow, thank you for that storymaster, it's a beautiful and exciting site you have here and congrats on your engagement, i read about it by storymistress.

about this specific piece i never thought about checking out the specifics in such details, I guess that goes under marketing.

I am a published columnist and realised that I only target specific people with my columns but now with this tool, i will target a wider range and see what comes up. It really is interesting and keep up the good work.

off topic, I wondered whether you though about giving an option of a different color scheme for the users. I really get bored with these colors sometimes.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
just to thank you for supporting the newbies,
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