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Review of A Blade of Grass  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a fine poem. I've seen relatively few poems on this site which seem to me to be real poems. Bob Deimel
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem. The author's effort and expertise are clearly obvious. This poem has a message which the writer expresses eloquently.
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Review of A Redneck Wedding  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is delightful. Bob Deimel
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Review of Superman No More  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Norman, this is nice. Bob
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Review of Almost  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Norman, look at the second to last stanza, third line. Change bet to best. Keep up the good work! Bob Deimel
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Review of Chivalry  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (5.0)
Norman, take a look at the forth stanza, forth line. Change that to that's. I like your poems. You have written an enormous portfolio! It's going to take me a while to read them all. You are one of the very few poets on this site whose poems rhyme. I wonder, do you consider most of the poems on this site real poems? I started writing about 55 years ago. At that time, I was not familiar with the kind of poetry which is on this site today. I wonder what you think. I encourage you in your writing. Robert Deimel
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Review of Happy New Year  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is one of the few "poems" I've read on this site which actually is a real poem. Almost all are not. I think those of us who are actually writing poems should get together, somehow. Robert Deimel
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Review of Dream  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Bikerider --
I liked your poem a lot. I only wrote one romantic poem, Ocean Poem. It is about the light reflecting off Mars when I was walking on a beach one night with a woman I had recently met. It was one of the happiest experiences I have ever had. She acted as if she were extremely happy. Following that weekend, I wrote the poem and sent it to her. She disappeared and I never heard from her again. I encourage you in your writing. I would appreciate any feedback on any of my other poems. Bob
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Review of Dream  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked your poem. It is one of the few I've read recently which seems to me like a real poem. I've only written one romantic poem -- Ocean Poem. Maybe you would like it. Robert Deimel
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Review of The Lonely Tower  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I'm new here. I was surprised that most poems I have read do not seem like poems to me. Most seem to me to be the product of 20 minutes of writing. But yours is delightful. You paint an interesting picture and also tell a story. I encourage you in your writing. I wonder what you would think of my poems. Robert Deimel
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Some of your writing reminds me of one of my poems, Lament Poem. I wonder what you would think of it. I suspect that you might identify with what I wrote. I encourage you. Robert Deimel.
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked your poem. Maybe I've always held a mistaken idea of what poetry is. I've been a writer most of my life, but I never took a course in poetry. I had always thought poetry was supposed to rhyme and follow a predetermined set of syllables and beats. Evidentally not. If you get a chance, tell me what you think of my poems. Thanks. Robert Deimel
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is one of the very few poems I have read here which seems to me like a poem. I'm new here. Almost all of the pieces I read in this section don't seem to me to be anything at all like my idea of poetry. Tell me, what is your opinion. I wish you would give me some feedback about the five poems I have posted here. Thanks. Robert Deimel
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (3.5)
I am new here. I identified with your poem. I understand that the human condition necessarily involves our sometimes feeling alone and depressed. I have sometimes felt separated from God against my will. It made no sense to me as I was trying to reach out to Him.
I wonder if you would enjoy my Lament Poem. I encourage you in your writing. Robert Deimel
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Andi--
I am new here. I liked your poem. It gives the reader a glimpse of your thinking as you relive this freightening event. It made me think of a question: Was the shooter a formerly good and normal boy who became distraught or furious or extremely depressed because he was the target of bullying by numerous other people? Or, possibly, was he ostrasized unjustifiably by mean peers? I just wondered. Perhaps because you had known him, you might have an insight into what actually happened.
Anyway, your poem makes people think. I encourage you in your writing. I wonder what you would think of my poems. I am happy I read your poem. Robert Deimel.
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Andie--
I am new here. I liked your poem. I identify with what you wrote. It reminded me a little of my poem, Lament Poem. I encourage you in your writing. Robert Deimel.
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am new here. I enjoyed your poem. I encourage you in your writing. Robert Deimel
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Review of Never Giving Up  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear WriterAlways --
I want to encourage you with your writing. Maybe sometimes just the fact that we write is cathartic. I wonder if you would be encouraged by my poem, Lament Poem? Robert Deimel
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Review of The Letter  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I am a new member. I liked your poem. I wonder if you would let me play with a few of the words, changing some of them. Would you appreciate that? I wonder what you would think of three of my poems -- two about Christmas and one poem, Lament poem, in which I am crying out to God because He doesn"t answer my prayers. I appreciate your good work. Robert Deimel
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Review of Fairy Tales  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
I am a new member. I identify with the loneliness and depression you wrote about. I was depressed when I wrote my poem called Lament Poem. I wonder if anyone would be encouraged or benefit from it. Maybe you would like it. Robert Deimel
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am a new member. I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the message. I wonder if you would like the two Christmas poems I wrote this past December. They are A Christmas Thought and A Christmas Star. I encourage you in your good work. I'm happy I saw your poem. Bob Deimel
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Review of CHRISTMAS PRAYERS  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I am a new member. I just read your Christmas poem and I liked it. I wrote two Christmas poems this past December. I had never written one before. I wonder what you would think of them. They are A Christmas Thought and A Christmas Star. Robert Deimel
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am a new member. I just read your poem and I liked it. I identified with what you wrote. I wonder what you would think of my poem, Lament Poem? Robert Deimel
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Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Mrs. Stehr--
I am a new member. I just read your poem about your lost daughter. I can not imagine the pain you felt. A couple of years ago, I wrote my poem, Lament Poem. I wonder if you could identify with it. I liked your poem. I'll bet your daughter did, too. Robert Deimel
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Review of Dear God  
Review by Robert Deimel
Rated: E | (4.0)
I am a new member. I like your poem. I believe I was saying something similar in my poem, Lament Poem. I wonder if you would like it. Robert Deimel
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