It's a fun little story/poem nothing groundbreaking but the story is sweet if simple, the rhyming scheme is well maintained, making the flow of the poem come off almost as a simple drum beat in likely the same way a child playing the drum wood which definitely gets you extra points. Overall I liked this story, and I'm glad I got a chance to read it.
you're writing is good and I hope you feel better within a reasonable time frame, I'm sorry to hear the world has you down so bad. life is just a pyramid scheme But there is still good in the world even if it is mostly books. hope you find some more good ones
Did you just want to give out free points to people because you only have one option in the poll, It's all Points are great and all that but I can't in good conscience give a good review to a pool that only has one option.
I chose the home monitor mostly because their job demands immediate action when that Proclamation is being made, even if they don't believe that woman they still need to act as they do in so far as getting her to a safe location away from her real or imagined perpetrator. So without further context of the story you're working on this is the most I can give you.
This is a kind of fun pole but there are only so many sex jokes you can tell in a row before they kind of start getting a bit derivative. It's still fun over all but I feel like there could be more here then gods fucking and donkey sitting there asses connected
I feel certain that both education and experience are fundamentally necessary for any endeavor, I do lean more towards education simply because I have seen too many people without it. I have however seen very educated people still made mistakes due to their lack of experience so it is obvious that it is not the be all end all in an endeavor
I'm sorry to hear that you were in a relationship that was unbalanced like that, it is always unfortunate when the affection we feel for others it's not reciprocated. This is a great story, thank you so much for telling us it. It is always great to hear such a heartfelt story, and you do a wonderful job of telling it
I'm not sure what you're trying to do with your metaphor here which kind of keeps this story from being compelling for me. However, your grammar is good and I like the iambic pentameter Which shows that it's not poorly written, just that at least for me the metaphor you may be trying to convey isn't getting through.
thank you this was very Helpful it really gave me a better understanding of how this site works and how diff points are distributed and it was done in a concise and helpful manner thank you
I want to thank the author for the opportunity they gave me, I have basically written this entire Interactive as besides me there has only been one person to add to this Interactive and they only added one chapter. so at this point I feel the interactive is more mine than theres I feel like I've done a decent job and people feel otherwise they're welcome to leave their own reviews or better yet add to the story themselves
there are to many of this all ready and they never go anywhere ether pick a better seneryo or really try and a lot more you self but this just seems lazy
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