|Hi Mckinely Rose
A great personal poem all the way through. I noticed you didn't mark the genre of this poem as personal.For I thought it was very personal, and are indeed the hardest to write about. You definetly gave it an appropriate name.
You wrote this from the heart, with a gifted technique for expression. I liked the way you described feelings for just what they are. I also liked the way you envisioned the little everyday moments that still linger inside.
I knew I was drawn in, from having had a similar situation happen. It had me crying half way into the poem.
You have made a fine example of how one can let their own emotions be the captain of their life boat, as you have shown the theraputic benefits that it holds.
I want to point out also how honesty plays an important role as it strengthens what is shared between a mother, son and daughter.
This poem touched me to my soul. You have shown us the best writers, write from the heart. You have given me a new goal. Keep writing and Thank You for sharing your wonderful gift for words.