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Review by Duke the Fluke
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed the witty way in which it was worded. Thought out Cleverly then laid out with the hint to question everything. Each section was a lesson on what to and not to do. The simple yet effective way to ponder a little longer. Take more time to notice, view from every angle, & investigate into whatever it is in general. I see the message clearly any criticism, is good criticism when it opens up the eyes. Very enjoyable, however, I was wishing it would keep on going. Keep up the great work. So poetically put with lots of Wisdom. Bravo.


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Review of The Hardest Poem  
Review by Duke the Fluke
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Mckinely Rose

A great personal poem all the way through. I noticed you didn't mark the genre of this poem as personal.For I thought it was very personal, and are indeed the hardest to write about. You definetly gave it an appropriate name.
You wrote this from the heart, with a gifted technique for expression. I liked the way you described feelings for just what they are. I also liked the way you envisioned the little everyday moments that still linger inside.
I knew I was drawn in, from having had a similar situation happen. It had me crying half way into the poem.
You have made a fine example of how one can let their own emotions be the captain of their life boat, as you have shown the theraputic benefits that it holds.
I want to point out also how honesty plays an important role as it strengthens what is shared between a mother, son and daughter.
This poem touched me to my soul. You have shown us the best writers, write from the heart. You have given me a new goal. Keep writing and Thank You for sharing your wonderful gift for words.


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Review of I Am Not Here  
Review by Duke the Fluke
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the strength and confidence this poem sends out. It says so much with just a few words. It allows one to see a relationship between the author and his God, which is strong. You wrote it well, with an insight you managed to put in its proper perspective. Thanks for sharing and showing this Gem.


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Review by Duke the Fluke
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi J. DangeRoss,

An excellent idea for a poem, I thought, maybe you are a bird watcher. I also thought it was very original.
It has a great flow to it with witty wording. It has the cuttest storyline that made me laugh all the way through it. Perfect for a child's type of entertainment; as well as adult's too. It made me happy while reading and sort of sad too for the little birds. You really put personality into the characters, quite charming. I liked it just the way it is. It is a favorite for me, as I see our styles of writing are similar. I love stories with happy endings. You definetly have a clever way of rhyming that to me is what made this little story-poem so delightful. Thankyou for sharing.


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Review by Duke the Fluke
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I like the way you kept the story moving along from when you were very young until grown-up. It was a very interesting semi-biography and I wished it were longer, I enjoyed it very much. You filled it with lots of information that is unusual and it WOWed me. Thankyou for sharing that little special part of your life. I'm sure you have lots more bits like that, you could be a next best seller.


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