REVIEW
Overall: Humorous and typical of people's nomal reactions to "love."
Positive Notes: It draws you in unexpectedly.
Negative Notes: Seems like it needs more of something. Feels too short.
Errors/typos: A few. I rewrote it with the corrections I found. Hope this helps somehow.
Now, everyone says college is fun-- and don't get me wrong, it is. There is a lot to do. Fun work out classes, study groups, clubs, and boys. Boys are where it always seems to go downhill for me. I didn't come to school thinking that I would fall in love with someone. I just assumed that, from past experience, maybe love wasn't for me. But, for some unknown reason, God placed a blonde-haired, blue-eyed angel in my life; his name, Ernie. It started out as just a simple friendship, but soon it developed into something more. He was like a drug for me, and then things then started to go downhill for us.
We were completely different, and yes, we had much in common, like a love for the Pittsburgh Penguins, Harry Potter, and Star Wars. He is handsome, athletic, tall, he has this sense of mystery. He is unlike anyone I had met before. Different, but the good kind. The love I had for him was unmatched to any other love I've ever given. He is strong and unafraid of anything. He made me feel safe. He built me up, as well as my dreams. He believed in me. But, for some reason, I pushed him away. When you have anxiety, you constantly think that you're going to be abandoned. Whenever you fall hard in love with a guy, it's hard to control that anxiety.
I would love to have this special person back in my life. Things are weird and I miss him. I normally don't talk about my issues or problems, and I probably should. But, whenever I was with him, everything seemed to melt away. He gives me fireworks still. When I hear his voice, or someone says his name, it puts chills throughout my body.
I know, I should probably fight to get him back, but I don't have any fight left in me. Being in love with someone like I was, it takes a lot out of you. I'm emotionally exhausted. I'll love him from a distance but I think he truly knows how much I love him.
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