There are a couple of technical accidents, “your” instead of “you’re”, “cowards” instead of “coward’s”, but these are little issues, easy fixes. On top of that, it’s difficult to judge punctuation in poetry, difficult sometimes to tell if something is an accident or an intentional artistic choice.
This is so beautiful. I’m sorry for your loss, but you’ve taken something so painful and turned it into a beautiful warning to the rest of us, that who we are matters and what we do alters those around us. I love the juxtaposition of the “f*** you” and “I love you”...this is just beautiful.
It’s clear you know how to pull emotion, and you do it really well. You did a great job of bringing to light aspects I’m not sure those who are hurting would consider before such an action. I’m sorry for your loss, and I hope you can find some sort of peace. Take care of yourself, okay? And, please, don’t stop creating!