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Review of L'aura del Campo  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love your take on the embellish prompt--colors and all--that reflect the condiments. Clever.
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for entry "Regicide
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love it! Have you considered sending your ditty to the chefs at the White House?
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love your time travel poem....original....the start of a saga?
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh...a perfectly chilling tale. Lovely details.
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Review of Outward Bound  
Rated: E | (4.0)
i didn't even read what the prompt for the day was. Just enjoyed your poem and the little twist.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love browsing the dollar store. Our everyday dishes came from there, and a set of great glass, heavy tumblers. I often find interesting food items, too. And always cards and gift wrap. And found bottles of bleach before the pandemic really got going! Happy writing!
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Review of Inferior Design  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like your brief, sweet story. I think you might expand it a bit, though.
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for entry "April evenings (Doha)
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
OOOOOO---love this one! I just got a book on hexes titled "Utterly Wicked" by Dorothy Morrison. Can you hex a plague?
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Review of Family recipe  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I have never made masala--have used store bought garam masala to add to cooking. Enjoued your septet.
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Review of Dawn  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lovely imagery. Last night the sunset here in Naples, Florida was a bright orange ball---I breathed in that glorious chakra energy.
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Review of Discarded  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Wow! Current, personal, powerful.
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Review of Introvert  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes, the story is a bit dark and creepy. But bad guys should always get their due.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This review is for "I Write in 2020", I have difficulty writing forms with rhyme and meter restrictions so always impressed by those attempts. Some of the meter in this seems a bit "off", but I am hardlt one to judge this. A valiant description of our current situation. Happy writing in this time of pandemic.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I am reviewing as your entry came up for I write in 2020. The hymn mentioned "it is well with my soul" is one of my favorites. I admire your devotion and steadfastness to your faith. We all need a faith anchor to hold on to through these perilous times. May your life be filled with grace and health.
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Review of Tingling Hooves  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Well Hoovsie--I always enjoy your little ditties. And an Irish limerick just in time for St. Paddy's Day! So you are greeting Galway with just a smile and a sweater? I sure and would like to see that. Is that a blue ribbon tied round underneath that kilt? Happy writing.
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Review of IT HAPPENS  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Love that you rhymed pinnacle and cynical.
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Review of MALLARD  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This little bit of 24 syllables made me chuckle. You aptly used the prompt word and turned it on it's head. Hope you won the day's award. A bit of levity in poetry is always a welcome gift. Daffy, and Scrooge McDuck and Huey, Duey, and Loouie, would all concur. Happy quacking--and writing.
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for entry "Highway Tune
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Thank you for introducing me to a new band that I wasn't familiar with. I saw Ford vs. Ferrari and don't recall this song making an impact on me. All I recall is a tune on the radio that Ken Miles and his wife danced to. I drive a 2016 VW Beetle Convertible names "Silky". My driving music is more Van Morrison. Happy writing.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Well I appreciate your little pop-up poem though I am not certain how well it fits the picture prompt. I would like to see an elaboration of the choices that you ultimately did make. We all do the best with what we know at the time. I would like to know how you feel your life is at this point. Happy writing.
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Review of L'aura del Campo  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, Kare--I think if you had the setting correct your entry would have won. I love singing--don't do anything with it these days.
chorus in high school-----when I attended church sang in the informal church choir. I too was too shy to solo. Until many years ago I took a voice class at Unity of Naples. The instructor encouraged me to sing, felt my voice was lovely--I did for a while--not much now. I have thought about learning the ukelele--I have short, stubby fingers. I am not good with instruments--tried guitar, then dulcimer, not likely to try the ukelele.
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Review of Confusion  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this insight. I have lost friends and family because of politics and religion. I have maintained some friendships in spite of politics and religion. That being said I now vet any new friends. Congratulations on your win in the Cramp!
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Review of Dad’s cure  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I enjoyed your tale of John and home remedies. I would like to see more concrete details in the narrative, though. Which "old country" did John come from. Did any of his remedies work? Before the availability of drug stores, health food stores, etc. people had to rely on herbs, plants, etc. for healing. And Sue his wife could have certainly used more detail. Happy writing.
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Review of My Ancestors  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Your tale of your ancestors is poignant and moving. Though you are adopted have you had your DNA done? It may give you further insights into your background. Remember, your ancestors flow back in time like a column of saints. Because of your adoption, you would actually have 2 columns--adopted and biological. Blessings!
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Review of A Warmer Season  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love what you did with the prompts and that you used a difficult form as the sonnet. I enjoyed your inclusion of a summer constellation.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
I appreciate and frequently participate in the shorter word length contests here on writing.com. Your piece introduced me to a contest I have not seen before. Your argument for the Bible is an honest one. However, the Bible, like life has many contradictions and inconsistencies. But I am not here to argue, only to rate. The only criticism I have is I thought this contest was flash fiction, and yours is more essay, not fiction. Nevertheless, happy writing!
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