I truly enjoyed your story. It is perhaps laced with a little reality? I find it based in the here-and-now laced with a wisp of magickal realism. That's kind of my process for stories as I am not very adept with plot or character. I will check out your portfolio and wish you pleasant writing journeys.
Well, that seems to be the way of our world. Concerned that it is too late to pivot our course toward destruction. Me, I am mudlarking, seeking shiny bits of joy in all the muck. I believe we have been in the apocalypse for a while now. Happy writing!