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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I love your story setting in Greece. Your details seem to be quite accurate. I think you might wish to change the name of the family from DuPont to something fictional. The DuPonts are quite well known and this could be confusing. Perhaps a Greek surname. The story has captured my attention and would like to read further. I am hoping it involves a Greek myth. Happy writing. I am thinking that the mansion might be more realistic if built/furnished in a Grecian manner. Just my humble opinion.
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Review of The Meeting  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am intrigued by this brief foray into your sci-fi omniverse. I also detect hints of subtle humor throughout--this lightens things up a bit. Like the idea of the sanruphrups and healing hounds. You clearly have a grasp of now and future technology. My only suggestion is that some of this new technology needs to be fleshed out further for the reader to have a better understanding. Happy writing!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
am eagerly awaiting more of this story. Animals, pets tug at our hearts because they are the epitome of love and kindness. They love us without reserve. I am sorry you suffered at the hands of a governmental agency. Banish the patriarchy and government, I say. A rare Bengal tiger was killed at our Naples Zoo because some fool thought it was a good idea to put his arm in the cage. Stupid humans. May 2022 be empty of stupid humans and full of magickal pets. Blessings.
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Review of The Platypus  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love your homage to the platypus.
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for entry "Cognitive Dissonance
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love it!
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for entry "Critical Mask
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Enjoyed this!
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Review of L'aura del Campo  
for entry "Blind [307]
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I enjoyed this thought/image. For some reason I immediately thought of an actual thing that some county fairs hold--table decorating. There are many arcane rules and regulations. I love vintage tableware, pottery, flatware and linens. I would love a contest like this---however, not enough space to store all this "stuff". Already have too much "stuff".
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Review of L'aura del Campo  
for entry "Angel of Light [297]
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh very nice. And I am glad you didn't blame Eve.
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for entry "Indigent
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Always enjoy your entries.
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Review of L'aura del Campo  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love your take on the embellish prompt--colors and all--that reflect the condiments. Clever.
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for entry "Regicide
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love it! Have you considered sending your ditty to the chefs at the White House?
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love your time travel poem....original....the start of a saga?
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh...a perfectly chilling tale. Lovely details.
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Review of Outward Bound  
Rated: E | (4.0)
i didn't even read what the prompt for the day was. Just enjoyed your poem and the little twist.
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Review of Inferior Design  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like your brief, sweet story. I think you might expand it a bit, though.
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for entry "April evenings (Doha)
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
OOOOOO---love this one! I just got a book on hexes titled "Utterly Wicked" by Dorothy Morrison. Can you hex a plague?
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Review of Family recipe  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I have never made masala--have used store bought garam masala to add to cooking. Enjoued your septet.
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Review of Dawn  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lovely imagery. Last night the sunset here in Naples, Florida was a bright orange ball---I breathed in that glorious chakra energy.
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Review of Discarded  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Wow! Current, personal, powerful.
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Review of Introvert  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes, the story is a bit dark and creepy. But bad guys should always get their due.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This review is for "I Write in 2020", I have difficulty writing forms with rhyme and meter restrictions so always impressed by those attempts. Some of the meter in this seems a bit "off", but I am hardlt one to judge this. A valiant description of our current situation. Happy writing in this time of pandemic.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I am reviewing as your entry came up for I write in 2020. The hymn mentioned "it is well with my soul" is one of my favorites. I admire your devotion and steadfastness to your faith. We all need a faith anchor to hold on to through these perilous times. May your life be filled with grace and health.
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Review of Tingling Hooves  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Well Hoovsie--I always enjoy your little ditties. And an Irish limerick just in time for St. Paddy's Day! So you are greeting Galway with just a smile and a sweater? I sure and would like to see that. Is that a blue ribbon tied round underneath that kilt? Happy writing.
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Review of IT HAPPENS  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Love that you rhymed pinnacle and cynical.
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for entry "Highway Tune
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Thank you for introducing me to a new band that I wasn't familiar with. I saw Ford vs. Ferrari and don't recall this song making an impact on me. All I recall is a tune on the radio that Ken Miles and his wife danced to. I drive a 2016 VW Beetle Convertible names "Silky". My driving music is more Van Morrison. Happy writing.
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